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Happy Endings

Monday, December 19, 2005

They’re all a matter of perspective. A short little twist on the ending of the movie.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4633    RATING: 8.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Mal snatched up the com, falling into a familiar routine that gave his weary mind some peace. "Kaylee, get set up for full burn. Soon as we clear atmo I want this place to be nothin’ more than a memory."

Without waiting for a response, he jammed the com back into place and spun to the pilot’s seat, his lips already forming a name out of habit. The wrong name. It caught in his throat as he faced River, her hands gripping the controls and her eyes fixed ahead.

"I can’t be him," she said, still watching the sky.

The captain hadn’t said the name. "How did you know ... ?"

She turned to lift an eyebrow at him.

"Guess you would at that," he smirked despite the odd feeling that he was suddenly naked. "Gifted and all." Mal looked back to his controls. "Still," he said, absentmindedly flipping a few switches, "wouldn’t want you to get the wrong idea."

"I know," River said to the sky.

The captain crossed his arms and turned to her. "And what exactly do you know, young lady?"

"I know you. And what you think of me."

"That so?"

River lips bent into a Cheshire grin, her eyes still on her work. She was enjoying this. "I always knew, especially when you didn’t want me to." The grin spread as she sifted through memories, her distant expression drawing a heavy gulp from Mal. "It’s all there – all the words for her, and me, and the rest of them. You keep them locked away. Swallow the key."

Her eyes swam back to the present, and they rose to bore into Mal. "But I hear you," she said. "Your words are the loudest. You’re the loudest one here."

Mal studied her for a moment, this little girl lost who was guiding them all. "I’ll try to keep it down," he said.

Both worked silently for a few moments as the ship sped toward the edge of the planet’s atmosphere.

"Know what I’m thinkin’ right now?" Mal asked as he checked a gauge in front of him.

River looked at him. There was a short silence.

"I belong," River breathed. "I belong here with you. No more secrets."

His eyes cut up toward

Comments
Monday, 19 December 2005 18:43
Creepy!!! But really cool................

..............in a Sixth Sense / M. Night Shyamalan kind of a way!!!!

Kinda freaks me out........... glad it's just fanfic.........................
Monday, 19 December 2005 18:43
Wonderful! I'm not generally fond of "and it was all a dream" type endings, but you put a beautiful twist on this by making it a fiendish lab experiment. Also, I like that Mal's dream of finding inner peace lives on, for himself and others, even if he doesn't. "Once you're in Serenity, you never leave...you just learn to live there."
Monday, 19 December 2005 19:42
Wow! Creepy and spooky as *diyu*. Very neatly done and reasoned but have to say I am so glad it wasn't all a fabrication (except in Joss's mind). Excellent work, *xie xie ni*, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 19 December 2005 20:50
I fear you.
Monday, 19 December 2005 20:54
*Bows down to you*

Damn.

So very... intense. And I loved every word, the whole concept was... fancinating. I love it.
Monday, 19 December 2005 21:56
Nicely executed!
Monday, 19 December 2005 22:17
*wibble*

You're a mean, mean man.

It was good, scarily so.
Monday, 19 December 2005 22:27
I'm gonna echo what everyone else has already said, creepy...intense...and I'm just a little bit scared of your brain now.
Monday, 19 December 2005 23:13
Whoa.

My head just exploded.
OUTOFTHEWORLD
Monday, 19 December 2005 23:20
Shiny.
Monday, 19 December 2005 23:36
I'm gonna keep up the echoing. Nice bit of "what if" played out there. I would actually be interested to see where you go with this, and if the people that River created in her mind actually help her to take back her body in reality...
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 20 December 2005 00:15
ACH!
Gorgeous.
And horrible! But brilliant.
Oh...oops! This is SameErtia. Forgot to log in.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 20 December 2005 00:19
very nice. and definitely jossian, if you remember that one buffy episode....
-kaynara
CUB
Tuesday, 20 December 2005 00:35
"if you remember that one buffy episode"

That's the first thing my wife said when she read it. I actually *don't* remember that episode.

I got the idea from a classic Civil War short story that's been ripped off by everybody from Terry Gilliam to Futurama. I just applied it to this 'verse and added a few personal touches.

But I'll be happy to take all the credit (and everyone's fear). Fear me and my ability to rip off classic literature!
Tuesday, 20 December 2005 03:56
Creepifyin'.

And yet, I rather enjoy being part of the Serenity Program my own self.
It brings me peace.
Here is my happy ending.
Here I belong...
JOY
Wednesday, 21 December 2005 04:13
mad props! even my boyfriend, who calls me a "flirefly flan" enjoyed this one - ironically enough, he's the one who first introduced me to the series.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 22 December 2005 20:39
I found the name of the short story you were talking about--it was driving me nuts.

"An Occurrence at Owl Creek Bridge" by Ambrose Bierce

Good job. Spooky.
CUB
Thursday, 22 December 2005 20:55
"An Occurrence at Owl Creek Bridge" by Ambrose Bierce

We have a winner!!
Friday, 23 December 2005 22:23
eep! and to echo cantonheroine:
here i belong...

b
Wednesday, 28 December 2005 20:42
woe
I didn't see that coming, thanks for a creative and interesting story
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 29 December 2005 10:18
with a few words you had well crafted a already existing horror in our minds.. the sanitized bed of a hospital. and that of the ship and her crew.

good work B if it get any better i will make my sister and you move to california and churn out great works of fiction for my benefit.. i suppose i would have to move to cali also but you two should become rich and moderately famous so i wont have to.

-ken
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 21 January 2006 06:21
cant... take... it!(brain explodes)...
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 27 April 2006 18:09
audios

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