Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

Swinging (part 1)

Tuesday, November 29, 2005

Loose lips and a rim world layover leave Jayne hanging. Not nearly as dirty as that sounds. Collaborative with smithandwesson.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3811    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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The kiss of a sweet breeze on her cheek beckoned Inara toward consciousness, the familiar comfort of a contented dream releasing its warm embrace.

"I don’t care what you have to do," a harsh, hushed voice was saying somewhere nearby. "Do you have any idea what kind of chance I’m taking using these kinds of drugs on a registered companion? No, I haven’t told anyone else, and I expect to be handsomely rewarded for that. Extracting information like that is not easy, especially when someone has been trained to resist..."

Inara’s eyes squinted and her head began to pound as awareness fully returned. The voice abruptly stopped. There was quick movement, and a man was standing over her.

"Ah, you’re awake." In the blink of an eye, the angry whispers had morphed into the smooth, refined charm of Mallory Stanton, the man on whose bed she now lay. Lacy white curtains fluttered in the afternoon sunlight over an open window. "I was beginning to think your indulgence at last night’s party would rob us of the entirety of our second day. Perhaps I’m too generous."

"Not at all," Inara cooed in the most convincing tone she could muster. She fought to bury any sign of fear while struggling to raise her very heavy head. "It’s only that I’m too easily tempted," she smiled. "I apologize."

"Not to worry," Mallory said, reaching a hand toward her cheek. With a great effort, she resisted shrinking from his touch as he continued. "I plan to engage you for another week."

"I’m afraid that’s not-" she began.

"And I simply won’t take no for an answer," he finished without blinking. His long fingers brushed her hair behind one shoulder. "Oh, you’re not going anywhere."

There was a long silence between them. A massive old clock ticked off the seconds.

"I see, Mallory."

"Call me Mal."

---

A bullet pinged away near Zoe’s shoulder as she ducked behind a crate to reload.

"We just want the girl," a voice called from just inside the cargo bay entrance. "No need for all this. Send ’er out and we’ll be on o

Comments
Tuesday, 29 November 2005 22:06
Tee hee hee Jayne.

And poor Inara. I'm worried about her.

Yay to the crew! They bein' all crew like and winning that round.

You're going to continue this, yes?
Tuesday, 29 November 2005 22:51
Bwaha! The bath house scene... so priceless! I kept stopping to highlight and copy lines for quoting here, but... it just kept getting better and better! Utterly hilarious!

The fight scene was witty and lovely, as well, but oooh, the creepiest ever? "Call me Mal." Yup... EEEK!


You have my full attention. How long until the next part??
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 00:26
""Jayne grimaced apologetically, moving the cigar to the corner of his mouth. "Knew once I shot ’im the bath was over." ""

Oh! That is prime Jayne! Loved this. Give us MORE!
Soon.
Please?
2X2
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 01:05
Realllllly likin' this, but like Jacqui, i'm also quite worried about Inara... I hope she refuses to call that huan dan 'Mal' and shoves 'Mallory' right in his face...

More soon, please!!!
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 01:44
Lmao! JAYNE!

I love that bath house scene. Reminds me of Maverick (the Mel Gibson version). And the action on Serenity, that was perfectly vivid. I love the rapport between Simon and Wash, and just how well everyone worked together.

Can't wait for more!
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 12:07
Good writing it got me right in. I too love the bath house, and want to know what's happening to Inara.
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 12:44
It's like you just walked smack dab in the middle of an episode...
Shiny as that is, what happens next?
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 16:51
"i ain't a gentleman o' leisure or nothin'..."
ah, jayne...

b
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 18:48
I loved Jayne to pieces in this one and Jayne's comment about the bath being over made me laugh but boy is Inara in deep trouble and it looks as if the *tamada hundan* had a back up plan in case they didn't get what they wanted out of Mal and Jayne. Shiny! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
CUB
Wednesday, 30 November 2005 23:48
Glad everyone's enjoying it! This story is all smithandwesson's concept. I just wrote part 1 for her.

She should be posting part two in the next few days, and it'll be her first Firefly fic.

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