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Deja Vu Ain't What It Used To Be (part 2)

Sunday, November 6, 2005

The pieces start to come together. Second of a four-part episode-style story set during Firefly.

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In the forgotten crevasses far below New Dunsmuir’s distinctive silver spires, darkened city streets swelled with life. The writhing carpet of humanity wound its way through a world of noise and neon Chinese signs. Shadowy figures met and parted, and from every corner a new temptation beckoned.

"Ooh, is that a toy store?" Wash asked, peering into an alcove.

"Of a sort," Zoe replied, ushering him onward through the crowd with a hand in his back. "Sir, where exactly are we going?"

Mal didn’t answer because he didn’t know. Not only was tracking himself an unsettling experience, it wasn’t altogether easy. Over the years he had cultivated a low profile and a selective memory, and both were working against him now. This time he had even kept the identity of the buyer to himself. But the corner ahead looked familiar, as did the dark passage beyond. Images like glimpses from a dream guided each step. "Just stay close," he said.

The trio ducked into the alleyway, which led to a wall.

"Dead end?" Zoe sighed.

"That sounds so... final," Wash grimaced.

Mal pointed to the wall. "No, there’s a-" He cut himself off and turned to Wash. "Wait, why in hell are you here again? I mean, I’m lookin’ around and I don’t see much to fly down here."

Wash smiled reassuringly. "Well, I - I’d never leave my lovely wife to fend for herself in the streets of..."

Zoe crossed her arms and looked unamused.

Wash turned back to Mal and shrugged. "Okay it’s mostly to laugh at you," he admitted in a rush. "There was already the whole thing with Inara-" He fought back a smile and hastily continued. "-which I’m told was very solemn and not funny in the least... but you know it can only get better from there."

His eyes bounced between two stone faces.

"I’ll laugh quietly," Wash said.

"That’d be a good idea," Mal said, looking back to the wall. "Last thing we wanna do is draw attention to ourselves."

His hands found a latch, a passageway opened, and he stepped inside with the other two close behind.

Mal

Comments
Sunday, 06 November 2005 19:14
*Giggle*

"Is it okay to laugh yet."

Can't wait to see Jayne and Kaylee out on the town together!
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 06 November 2005 19:19
Gooooood stuff! I love Wash and the intro going from "temptations" to toy stores. :D

Inara seems awfully down. :( Bless Book. That was a beautiful exchange.

Saffron, oh dear. Kaylee and Jayne doing classy?? Now I am scared!


This is shaping up to be absoloutely excellent! I can't wait for the next part!
Sunday, 06 November 2005 19:26
excellent :)
BELLONA
Sunday, 06 November 2005 20:02
"I see a ‘but’ coming," Wash said.
"We still talkin’ about whores?" Kaylee asked.

hee. *grins*

can't wait to see kaylee and her "gentlemanly escort"

b
Sunday, 06 November 2005 20:25
Good stuff.Keep it coming.Can we all join in and write a paragraph?I think I might be lost,but I thought maybe this was one of those stories the fans take up and continue by each writing a paragraph.....................reckon I could be wrong.
Sunday, 06 November 2005 20:32
I like this.
Sunday, 06 November 2005 20:33
Wow. I wonder what Mal actually -did-.
Sunday, 06 November 2005 23:13
Quiet and classy? Oh that's hilarious. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
HYDRATIC
Monday, 07 November 2005 22:51
yay! more please!
Thursday, 10 November 2005 22:07
Just started reading this one and have to quit for now. Grr. BUT. I wanted to say I really love what you are doing with the initial descriptives. It's very crisp and clean. I'm going to be taking lessons from you n smithie.
Sunday, 13 November 2005 07:41
This is good Cub! I'm making my way onto the rest, as it's hooked me also. Very nice and clean. Really enjoying your story telling.

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