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Nighttime in the desert always reminded Zoe of Serenity Valley. Rim world deserts were all the same, barren and scarred and merciless. Death always waited in the darkness, waited for her to lower her guard so it could reach out and grab her. So she never did.
Still the wind would bite away at her, pinching her ears and burning her cheeks. Every breath would fill her lungs with ice, with air so cold it wasn’t cold anymore, wasn’t anything but numb. And it would spread through her body until the cold and the numb were all that was left, until she clung to the numbness.
Tonight, Serenity Valley was called Braggadocio.
She cursed under her breath. When Jayne shot down Billy Evisse back in town, he had condemned her and the captain to this long night. They had to keep the ship and shuttle near town just in case. So Zoe and Mal had been on horseback since twilight a few hours ago, and there was still a long ride ahead to the rendezvous with their job contact in Kowloon.
Zoe glanced at the man galloping along to her right. Mal’s lips were tight, eyes straight ahead, just like back in the cargo bay when she had tried to talk him out of going. He said they needed the work, and that was that. But she knew that wasn’t that. Mal’s face had slowly settled into this look while Wash waited in vain for Inara’s reply about the booby traps. Zoe knew that what the captain really hoped to find in Kowloon was answers: whether this was all a setup, who was behind it, and how many people they had to kill to set it right. She didn’t expect Mal’s eyes would budge until all those answers – and Inara – were in plain view.
Not that there was much to see at the moment, not much but desert.
Stars are kinda shiny, though, she thought, looking up. Big open sky just about full to bursting. Lately she found herself noticing the stars a whole a lot more. Seemed to start right around the time she met her husband.
And lately she found the deserts weren’t quite so empty anymore.
Nothing was.
"Hey," Ma
uurgh...you are eeeeeevil for making me get all worried for inara, then guilty for feeling worried over inara when jayne's maybe gonna die, then guilty for feeling guilty, then worried i'm cracking up...
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Did you post that under a different name?
have to wait to see how this turns out *bites nails*
This is a collaborative story between smithandwesson and I. We're alternating writing each part. But there should be handy links at the bottom of each that takes you straight to the next one, so you don't have to search.
The scene with Inara was wonderful. The perfect twilight feeling between confusion and instinct.
Wash is.. hilarious! There's no other words, and your Zoe has a depth that we didn't even see on the show. Subtle and quiet but powerful. The stars, that was a lovely image.
Jayne and Kaylee... adorableness, all around.
And then Zoe and Mal, hilarity and a wonderful transition to deadly serious tension. And yet more suspense!
I'm a great fan! Please, post the next part soon!
Am in love with this Swinging thing you and Smith have got going. Not loving the "how do I find the other parts" deal, but I'll figure it out since the things so shiny I can't NOT.
Suggestion, Cub: You and Smith post the WHOLE THING as one story when you're done. Would help the helpless.
Fave line: "And Jayne wasn’t even here." being part of Wash's surprised realization at him being the life of the furniture-breaking saloon party, not Jayne.
Do not leave us hanging here!
errr...no pun intended.
Can't wait to read more, and discover Mal's choice... I think I know his choice, I HOPE I know his choice, but, you'll probably shock the hell out of me or something... post more soon, pleeeeeeease!!!
You can't take the sky from me
Jayne or Inara?! Who will it be?!
Both, of course. Right? RIGHT?!
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