Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Adventures in Sitting

Monday, November 21, 2005

HARD NC-17. Pretty much pure PWP, complete with slash. Mostly just to see if I can.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 5135    RATING: 8.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Everything was perfect.

Except for the shouting match she had with Jayne before he, Mal, and Zoe left for planetside. And except for whatever was mucking up the environmental systems and turning the whole of Serenity into a sauna. Kaylee would fix both problems later.

Right now, here in Simon’s room, everything was perfect. He had stopped rubbing her feet, stopped laughing, and locked eyes with her. His hand had moved with a purpose over her bare ankle and started a painfully slow trip up her leg. Both had stopped breathing. And right now, she was the one needing fixing.

Their lips met and she pulled him on top of her. His hands lost all direction in the sea of clutching need, but now she had enough purpose for both of them, and between frantic kisses she was working to shed their clothing – first undoing, then pulling, then ripping.

Simon’s grip tightened on her arms, and he pushed her back to the bed. Suddenly he stopped and studied her through bright eyes. Her jumpsuit was down to her waist now, her chest bare, and her amber hair splayed across white sheets and slender shoulders. Steady hands landed on those shoulders, pulling her arms away from her sides, and slid down over smooth pink skin - impossibly slowly, impossibly lightly – traveling over her floating ribs, shifting as she breathed, then circling under the warm mounds of her breasts.

His fingers traced around each, circling patterns across flushed, rosy skin. It was too gentle, too light. Her dry mouth worked silently in desperation, but the torture was unrelenting. Just intricate, tingling patterns racing across her breasts dotted with lightning flashes of pleasure when he brushed across her firm peaks. He’s done this before.

After an endless blissful torment, one hand slid down over her stomach and into the depths of her jumpsuit... over her thigh …across her mound to the other thigh as her hips arched.

The stillness of the room’s soft glow was broken by an involuntary moan as Kaylee’s core pleaded for his touch.

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 21 November 2005 20:31
You started out with heated Silee, it gets interrupted and Kaylee all of a sudden goes to Jayne... I don't get it?

The River/Inara thing was *interessting* however.
Monday, 21 November 2005 20:47
Ok, so not the thing to be reading at work....

I really was only able to skim it, but great sex! *sings* Kaylee loves Jayne...
Monday, 21 November 2005 21:46
Mostly just to see if you can? Well.. you can! *g*

Whoa, River using Inara, Kaylee and Jayne... sweaty Mal! What's not to love? *g*

Poor Inara, though. I hate hate hate to see her sense of self-worth undermined so carelessly. Bad River.

Monday, 21 November 2005 22:44
You did it!!!

And you managed to break my heart in the meantime. Poor Inara!! That's just... oh, wow.

Was wondering how you were gonna pull this off (Dr. Freud: "Interesting choice of words"). Meh.

Kudos to the PWP!
CUB
Monday, 21 November 2005 23:53
For those who don't know (and care enough to still be reading), I've always struggled writing intimacy in my normal, action-and-comedy-heavy fics. Lots of teasing and virtually no payoff. So this was basically a big experiment/writing exercise.

I found my muse here by making each character a metaphor:

Simon = Me. Tentative, embarassed and unintentionally a big tease.

River (and Kaylee) = You, the reader. Observing and feeling every emotion, and wanting satisfaction.

Inara (and Jayne) = Firefly canon, being used by the reader for gratification.

All of that's probably irrelevant to you, but I just wanted everyone to know where I was coming from with this.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 22 November 2005 03:11
this makes no sense wutsoever... Hot Silee, then Jaylee??

The Rinara stuff was good though.
Tuesday, 22 November 2005 04:05
The Rinara stuff was VERY good. :)

I'm with the others on the abrupt switch from Simon to Jayne. Kaylee has a bit more consistency than that, I think.

But as an experiment in writing style, I think you did very well. And yah, give anything to have an afternoon with Jayne like that!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 22 November 2005 04:22
You guys...

Kaylee was just horned up and used Jayne. Kinda like Buffy and Spike. Hot sex, nothing more.
CUB
Tuesday, 22 November 2005 04:37
"Kaylee was just horned up and used Jayne. Kinda like Buffy and Spike. Hot sex, nothing more."

That.

Never fear, this is definitely my first and last PWP. I overthink it and make it all too subtle, so I guess this kinda thing just isn't for me.

Oh well.
Tuesday, 22 November 2005 05:08
If Joss Whedon got bummed out every time some Studio guy didn't get where he was coming from, we'd all be on the Web talking about some other shows. Or, egads, maybe reading a book.

Not that you're Whedon or anything...
JOY
Tuesday, 22 November 2005 05:46
no, it was great! I had to read the part about Kaylee going to Jayne's bunk about 3 times to realize what was going on, but once I did, it got even more interesting. The only thing that would have made it more obvious that he was being used would be for Kaylee, like Inara, to call out someone else's name, . . . but then again, that would actually BOTHER Jayne, where it didn't River.
Tuesday, 22 November 2005 05:50
Damn. That was great!!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 22 November 2005 20:00
oh...my.
does that have to be the last PWP? cuz i wouldn't mind some more...
:)
Thursday, 24 November 2005 20:50
*gulp* i...um...phew...i...well...that's just...ahem...

b
Saturday, 26 November 2005 09:23
My. Sweet. Buddha! That was so gorram hot, Cub. Lovely and lyrical at the start:"her amber hair splayed across white sheets and slender shoulders" and then I got to where you gave me Jayne giving it to Kaylee, him throwing her captured ankles up over his head (GOOD LORD) and: "With two quick motions, he freed his throbbing manhood and lowered her to the tip.

Then he stopped and looked at her. And waited.

Serenity hummed at her back.

"Please," she whispered, her arms around his neck."

Props to Cub: "And waited." I died a billion deaths in those two words. Ya gots da goods here. If you don't write more Jaylee it'll be a crying shame, with me doing the crying.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 18 December 2005 22:36
SHINY! hot silee!rinara...uh..interesting. and jaylee...well i hate jaylee in general cuz jayne just seems like someone who'll live off whores 4 life...not that i dont luv him, but yeah. shiny fic though
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 19 January 2006 02:01
Like the Inara thing once I got used to the idea of her and River. Bit concerned about the Jaylee thing... Something is not quite right there.

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