Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Midnight Snack

Wednesday, November 16, 2005

The snow turns into Rayne, and Jayne has a bad case of the munchies. A little throwaway vignette that wouldn't shut up.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4641    RATING: 8.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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A world of white streaked and swirled around him, wind roaring in his ears, his eyes squinted and flogged with snow. He saw a whole lot more of nothing than he ever hoped to see, but glimpses of depth and shadow gave him the familiar feeling in his gut that he was on the right track.

There was a shoulder-high opening in the wall of snow to his left. This had to be it. He flung himself forward into it, landing on his stomach, and the blizzard dropped away behind him.

Jayne threw the jacket hood away from his hat and pulled off his goggles. The cave that opened up ahead looked to be a natural one, mottled blue and white ice undulating into a small tunnel that twisted out of sight. There were voices around the bend. His hand slid into a jacket pocket and activated a signal.

He rose to a crouch and quietly moved forward through the tunnel. There was no way to know how long it would take Mal and Zoe to get here, and he couldn’t chance waiting.

Jayne inched forward, careful steps crunching toward the bend. The voices grew louder.

Reaching the corner, he flattened his back against the ice and heaved a few fogging breaths before chancing a glimpse. Two men, both with slung rifles, and River lying unconscious at their feet. They were facing away, looking out into the storm through an opening at the other end of the cave.

Jayne’s head darted out of sight as he pressed his back to the wall of ice again and listened to the men talk. They were waiting for a break in the storm before going to their rendezvous point.

Just two men. He couldn’t just stand there and wait, couldn’t chance them taking the girl or hurting her. His train of thought hurriedly switched tracks. Besides, might be there’s some fun to be had.

A large pistol emerged from Jayne’s coat, and he strode around the corner into view of the two men, grinning widely. They were still peering out into the snow. He couldn’t resist. "If you boys are lookin’ for some pain, all ya gotta do is-"

It was over before it happened

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 16 November 2005 21:00
'Then there was Ariel, and it wasn’t all about the money. First she made him afraid, then ashamed, then she made him stupid. Still did.'

This is one of the best explanations for Jayne's actions on Ariel that I have yet to run across. Brava!
Wednesday, 16 November 2005 21:01
You write Jayne so very perfectly. But you aren't converting on me, are you?
CUB
Wednesday, 16 November 2005 22:28
"But you aren't converting on me, are you?"

I consider myself a free agent, or at least reasonably priced.

I have no idea why this little thing popped into my head. It just did, and it kept nagging at me until I wrote it. *shrug*
Thursday, 17 November 2005 10:51
*squeaks with joy* yay!!! been a while since i've read a good rayne fic

b
Sunday, 20 November 2005 11:06
Lovely Rayne, Cub. Shot through and through with shiny goodness. Got more? Can you take us deeper? You know I want you to go further with these two. You do them so well.

This is my fave line for the kodak it slapped up into my mind like a great movie scene: "He noticed that Jayne’s right arm had sunk into the slush of the cave floor. Something was wrong. His gaze followed the arm from the shoulder, across a shadow under the ice, to the place where his hand should be. His eyes widened as he saw the tip of a gun barrel breaking the surface."
Sunday, 20 November 2005 11:08
P.S. Our Jayne is so great at self-preservation and helpin' to preserve our BDHs. Or at least the ones he cares most about. Your story points that out in spades.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 05 January 2006 01:11
Yay! I just wish it wasn't so short... but hey that's me.

And... am I the only one that can picture Jayne wincing each time he gets slapped? Kinda his whole body tensing and caving in slightly at each slap and his arms slightly raising up defensivly, like "ow... what I do? hey, ow!" Low shot too, make him look bigger so as he gets slapped by a tiny girl it looks funnier.

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