Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL
Badlands (chapter 4, finale/epilogue)
Friday, October 28, 2005
Time for some violence. Handy link to chapter 1 inside for those of you who are just joining us.
CATEGORY: FICTION TIMES READ: 3516 RATING: 9.0 (PG13) SERIES: FIREFLY
Comments
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 28 October 2005 19:09
Awww, poor Jayne.
Lol, yes, that's all I can say. My little shipper heart bleeds for him.
Good tale you wove here. I like River going to Wash to explain the engine, great touch.
Lol, yes, that's all I can say. My little shipper heart bleeds for him.
Good tale you wove here. I like River going to Wash to explain the engine, great touch.
Friday, 28 October 2005 20:48
Zoe's comment about spacing the Captain and saving the cargo was priceless. This was lovely with lots of nice touches and the action was good too. Can't wait for the next part. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 28 October 2005 20:59
*Serenity roared into the air as horses spilled onto the top of the cliff*
Shiny!
May we please have another story?
Shiny!
May we please have another story?
Friday, 28 October 2005 22:53
-->"Woo!" Kaylee yelled. "Ow."
Oh, priceless. (You shot Kaylee, you bastard!) I'm glad there wasn't too many injuries, all our heroes are safe, and River's bringing back of Jayne's dream, bringing back the pilot episode was just brilliant.
Thank you.
Oh, priceless. (You shot Kaylee, you bastard!) I'm glad there wasn't too many injuries, all our heroes are safe, and River's bringing back of Jayne's dream, bringing back the pilot episode was just brilliant.
Thank you.
Saturday, 29 October 2005 01:52
Thanks Jacqui - and everyone who read/reads the story. Yeah, the Kaylee hangover was my favorite thread of this chapter. Lotta fun.
I'll definitely write another story at some point. But later. And shorter.
God I'm tired.
I'll definitely write another story at some point. But later. And shorter.
God I'm tired.
Saturday, 29 October 2005 02:28
This was very enjoyable!! You've got the characters down well. I hope to see more in the future!!
- Soul
- Soul
Tuesday, 01 November 2005 18:17
Very nice :)
There's a whole lotta fanfic love going around just now, ain't there? ;)
There's a whole lotta fanfic love going around just now, ain't there? ;)
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 04 November 2005 21:08
Oh, I love my Kaylee. Shiny fic, I'll say- the scene in the infirmary was good. And yes, I probably should be able to think up a better word than that...But it works.
Simon firing the gun was brilliant, River helping Wash but mostly Zoe's comment at the end there. Great fic.
Simon firing the gun was brilliant, River helping Wash but mostly Zoe's comment at the end there. Great fic.
FLOATINGCHANDELIER
Friday, 04 November 2005 21:08
Oh, I love my Kaylee. Shiny fic, I'll say- the scene in the infirmary was good. And yes, I probably should be able to think up a better word than that...But it works.
Simon firing the gun was brilliant, River helping Wash but mostly Zoe's comment at the end there. Great fic.
Simon firing the gun was brilliant, River helping Wash but mostly Zoe's comment at the end there. Great fic.
Tuesday, 15 November 2005 11:13
OH ARGH!!! WHY MUST UP BUILD THE ANGST! He was going to tell inara, and he chickens out AHH! ::smaks our captain reynolds in the butt with a sword like inara did:: "it takes one pound of prusure to brake skin but it only takes one moment of cowardice and hesitation to brake a heart captain!" .... ok now that i got that out heh i loved it you are very good at getting the characters voices! Good Job! Write more please with a cherry on top!
MERCENARYSONG
Thursday, 14 September 2006 06:03
A masterpiece in four chapters. That was friggin' awesome. Write on.
Friday, 16 November 2007 05:15
Well, here I am way late at night, wasting time. But boy am I glad I did. This was delightful -- great voices, particularly Zoe and Wash.
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