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Badlands (chapter 3)

Wednesday, October 26, 2005

Well. This definitely went in a new direction.

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Jayne paced the common room like a caged animal. "I ain’t sittin’ here waitin’ to get shot! Now I jus’ told ya they know where we are!"

"They won’t come at night," Zoe answered calmly. "That’s not Patience’s style."

The rest of Serenity’s crew silently weighed this while Jayne continued to pace and mutter. "Layin’ in a bunk while they surround us don’t sound too restful to me."

"There’s nothing else we can do tonight," Zoe replied. "And if we don’t get some rest before morning, we’re dead in the water."

"Except - you know - in the desert," Wash added.

"Stop helping, honey," Zoe smiled.

"What about captain and the others?" Jayne blurted out. "They’re our ticket off this rock, Wash said so hi’self. We find them-"

"I tend to agree with Jayne," Simon said.

"If I want your opinion, you go se -" Jayne started. "I mean... yeah."

Wash did a double take. "Could we back up to the part where Simon turns into someone who agrees with Jayne? I think I missed that the first time."

The doctor raised his eyes from the floor. "It’s not just the captain out there. There’s the shepherd and... and Kaylee."

As Simon continued, River, who had been curled in a corner, slowly stood and leveled a lowered, piercing stare at Jayne.

The mercenary looked as though he’d just tried Mudder’s Milk for the first time. He shifted, fidgeted, and eventually interrupted Simon just to get his mind off the girl. "Doc’s right. We don’t find Kaylee, don’t none o’ this matter noway." As he finished, still warily watching River, he started moving his head left and right to try to break her visual death grip. She swayed with him.

Then she spoke, distantly, never breaking the connection. "The answer’s there." All eyes turned to her, following her gaze across the room to Jayne. "Just have to show them. That’s how it works."

Silence.

Jayne left the room, muttering to Zoe as he passed. "At least somebody’s bein’ sensible."

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Hooves thundered against rock, and the chill wind of the badlands swept p

Comments
Wednesday, 26 October 2005 11:36
Oooh, I like, I'm very intrigued.

I loved Jayne's dream, it was perfect! I particularly liked the wire detail. And Kaylee's drunken desperation, kinda sad, but I giggled all the same.

-->"I'm 'nara. Take me ri’ here! Ri’ here in th’ dust!"

You did this very well.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 26 October 2005 13:24
But who was the little girl that sprung them?
CUB
Wednesday, 26 October 2005 14:19
"But who was the little girl that sprung them?"

Just some girl from the town. The preacher spoke to her from the window and convinced her to free them. Was that too subtle?
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 26 October 2005 15:05
<i>"Ye soo! What’n the..." Jayne stammered. "Can’t ya go be crazy in your own room? I was havin’ a real good dream too."


"I know," River smiled, panting.</i>

LOL This is so funny!! I wish she'd spill some secrets when she peeks into Mal's mind when he's thinking of Inara.

I'm really enjoying this. A chapter a day is sweet!
Wednesday, 26 October 2005 15:58
"sun's comin' up"
typical mal response to a body bein' all poetical

b
Wednesday, 26 October 2005 16:42
Very much enjoying this and looking forward to seeing what happens next. Hope Mal, Book and Kaylee get back to Serenity before Patience has a chance to do something evil enough to give Niska pause. Ali E :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 26 October 2005 20:30
The girl was a trap from Patience... let them think she was a rescue when they were just playing straight into her hands.

Hmmm... I'm trying to follow River, here. As best anyone CAN follow her. What is it she's saying?

MORE MORE
Saturday, 29 October 2005 02:20
"She can stay..."

Gorram hi-larious!!! Great chapter.

Now onto the end...

- Soul
FLOATINGCHANDELIER
Wednesday, 02 November 2005 21:38
Wash did a double take. "Could we back up to the part where Simon turns into someone who agrees with Jayne? I think I missed that the first time."
Heh. Simon....Agreeing....With Jayne? Oh, that line made me grin. Wash's lines always make me grin. Poor Kaylee. Nice chapter, as always.
Sunday, 23 April 2006 21:16
It was good but the drunk, desperate Kaylee freaked me out. Over all it was very well done.

Sarah



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