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Badlands (chapter 1)

Sunday, October 23, 2005

I asked my wife if my second Firefly story should be a comedy, angsty romance, character study, or epic action/adventure. She said "yes."

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"Hey, wait a ruttin’ minute!" Malcolm Reynolds’ hand landed on her shoulder and spun her around.

Inara shrugged the hand away, her eyes flashing. "I think I’ve done enough waiting." An instant later the cool control was back, like the glassy surface of a lake, swallowing the stone and spreading the ripples. "Captain Reynolds, if I didn’t know better I’d say you’re intentionally stalling me."

"No, I know you’re a busy young lady. Stuff to-" His eyes wandered. "Do." A swallow, and he continued. "Just wanna make sure you know the plan’s all."

"Oh, is that so?" she answered sarcastically. "What I know is that I’m supposed to meet you here tomorrow. I also know that in the meantime this ‘plan’ of yours is probably going to get you killed-" Mal looked away, exasperated, but Inara caught his gaze again, moving closer. "along with who knows who else."

Inara waited, her eyes searching, pleading, but he dodged them.

"We got mouths to feed here," Mal said to the wall. "That means we gotta work."

A little of the coolness slipped away again, and she moved close enough to be heard with a whisper. "Mal, this is insane. You know that, right?"

His eyes now braved her shoes. "It’s just business."

"Business that doesn’t concern me, I suppose," she said, her breath touching his cheek.

"No more than yours concerns me." The captain turned his back now, the last of his nerve failing, and he deeply involved himself in doing nothing.

A few seconds later, Inara’s cool voice came over his shoulder. "Then I guess I’ll see you tomorrow."

"We’ll be waiting," Mal said. And he walked away without looking back.

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"I think we might be in trouble," Wash said, frantically flipping switches. He checked a panel to his right, and his brow knotted. "Yeah, we’re definitely in trouble." Wash snatched up the radio, and his voice rang through the ship. "Mal, you might wanna get up here."

A few seconds later the captain appeared in the doorway to find the pilot leaning back in his chair with his arms folded

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 23 October 2005 19:03
I wish! Please....continue!
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 23 October 2005 19:07
Yes, please continue!

Very intriguing so far, and great job on the speech patterns!

I hope Inara won't be gone the entirety of this adventure! :)
Sunday, 23 October 2005 19:17
very nice!
Sunday, 23 October 2005 19:37
star light, star bright, first star i see tonight...please bring me another installment of badlands!!! *crosses fingers for luck* please?!?

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MAI
Sunday, 23 October 2005 19:46
fantastic start. can't wait to see that's to come.
KAYLEEISMINE
Sunday, 23 October 2005 21:30
great story please continue
SKYE2477
Sunday, 23 October 2005 22:07
great story... really have the voices down... need more soon!!
Sunday, 23 October 2005 22:10
Oh Wow, EXCELLENT! Loved every bitty bit of this but poor Mal, to come face to face with Patience. Some people have the worst luck. Got to figure Inara is going to bend his ear something fierce if Patience leaves him in one piece at the end of this. Hope all our shiny heroes are okay, poor Simon is going to need some doctoring his own self I'm thinking. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 23 October 2005 23:00
Don't make us wait for the next chapter. I'm already on tenterhooks.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 23 October 2005 23:13
more please :)
Sunday, 23 October 2005 23:29
I wish, oh do I wish! Sounds just like an episode.
Monday, 24 October 2005 00:06
We wish already! We wish!!

This was great. You wrote everyone very well.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 24 October 2005 00:44
Oh! More, definitely!

Syzg
Monday, 24 October 2005 02:14
I second that. Bring it on! By the sound of it, you have it all adventure, romance humor... you can't fail.
CUB
Monday, 24 October 2005 04:05
I'm thrilled you guys are enjoying it! I'll knock out chapter 2 asap.
MERRIE
Monday, 24 October 2005 04:22
More indeed! Bring on the angsty drama! :D

-Merrie
Monday, 24 October 2005 05:12
Faboooooo!
Give us more!!!!!!!
And errr.. wooden soup ladel?
Monday, 24 October 2005 12:17
yes, please more.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 24 October 2005 13:09
Wow! Listen to your wife more often.

More please. Any fic that makes me grin like an idiot at the funny parts is damn good fic. And the action is great!

If wishes were horses we'd all be eatin' steak.
Saturday, 29 October 2005 02:10
Wow, I can't believe I missed this the first time around!This really pulls you right into the story!! Great stuff!

Well, off to chapter 2...

- Soul

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