Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

Bell, Book and Candle pt 4

Saturday, May 10, 2008

Book has been vanished. Serenity taken hostage. Mal is getting annoyed. Kaylee's getting curious. Inara is getting ambassadorial.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3758    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: Credit where credit’s due – and that aint to me!

Joss Whedon and Brett Matthews – the pie’s all yours!

This story is set just prior to Those Left Behind.

Part four: There is a light

When he really wanted to Jayne Cobb could move with surprising quiet for a man of his size – following behind his gun to round the steps and enter the upper level of Serenity’s access bay. No/one heard him – no/one saw, but then this was routine – he’d lost count the number of time Zoë and him had had to creep to vantage, step up at the right moment and rain merry hell on any unfortunate son-of-a-hump dumb enough to be stood below, gun thumping, threatening, ugly, undesirable – hell, just plain not crew.

Honestly, he could have stayed longer in the tub.

Huh. It did gnaw on him some though wondering where the Tam girl had got to – hiding out in one of a thousand places Serenity had for just that purpose. It would be too much to hope she’d got back in her damn box. Yup, even Jayne knew that was one bird with no wings and never gonna fly.

The notion, that was.

Not the girl.

Hell, ‘cept the ruttin' crazy herself probably thought she had wings!

Still, that way maybe she’d jump off the balcony and break her fool neck – wouldn’t have to worry nights ‘bout that killer brain of hers the purple-bellies put in. Doc’ never did explain it, sparing my blushes just proves it’s gotta be bad.

Crouched low and leaning into the scope of his weapon, Cobb could see the Doctor himself. Looking a little outta sorts there Doc’, likely they won’t have you in the Core no more they see how your hair aint in place. Jayne’s finger was lying comfy against Vera’s trigger. How ‘bout I spare you the pain, huh Doc’?

Nah – not with a killer brain on the loose.

Aint sure how many men we got down there – plenty by my reckoning. Enough for a real ruckus any rate. Well gorram it, bring it on! Zoë can handle herself well as any, and she aint tied to no Captain’s apron st

Comments
Saturday, 10 May 2008 10:23
Well written but all kinds of confusing none the less. Not surprised that Sebastian was a conduit for Bell, that was a nice touch but boy is this slippery and not just because of the oil. It sounded from Lucille's rambling that there might be something like nano technology in the oil, little nanites or somesuch. Creepifying stuff. The bit that felt wrong was Kaylee going on to that ship when no one answered and poking around inside then stating she was going to fix what was wrong with their engine. I cannot see Kaylee ever being that dumb especially when dealing with property that is not her own and owned by people she hasn't met not to mention that she doesn't have her tools with her either. Do feel sorry for their last mechanic though. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 10 May 2008 14:58
I have a friend who went to the Serenity premiere in Edinburgh. She uses a wheelchair. At some point, Adam managed to shake off his minder and silently hid himself in between her wheelchair and the one next to her [GGG].


Vera
Saturday, 10 May 2008 16:01
>Could bury him under a couple of strangers maybe – that might work, like the time me and Mal had to lie under them cows, only better coz dead men don’t fart like – well not right-away anyhow.

Great line!

Oh, and I don't think Kaylee's going to fix their engine - I think she's going to fix their mechanic.

I wait for things to start coming together ...

Sunday, 11 May 2008 17:08
So someone gets to explain to Jayne that he got a mouthful of nanites? That's gonna be fun...


And Kaylee fixin' the engine? I'm thinking BIG-badda-boom.
Tuesday, 13 May 2008 14:06
Thought I would comment since i read, but didn't. I like feedback and I figure you do, too. Great story! I am liking the way this is written. It's fresh and fun. Great lines as well. love good dialogue.
Saturday, 30 August 2008 01:42
Love the suspense you are building! I'm upset I didn't read this sooner.

That's what I get for being awayfor awhile.

Again EXCELLENT Stuff.

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