Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

Bell, Book and Candle pt 2

Tuesday, April 29, 2008

Serenity has found a cargo of wine is actually oil.
There are complications. Book and Kaylee are taking in the town of Candle.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3589    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Serenity has discovered that a cargo of wine is actually oil.

This story takes place just prior to Those Left Behind.

part two - oil in my lamp, keep me burning

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Wouldn't seem possible to put a stain upon the stars... but the unwholesome looking craft - dipping through the black, between the splinters of light and down below the curvature of the red apple moon - well, it seemed to do just that.

The Justice had a reputation, 'almost Reaverish' as many said. This made the ship's Captain sleep just happy at night... but then Captain Lancy shared both the appearance and the reputation of his vessel.

Right now as his boat smeared between the lunar ring tracking its righteous fugitive, Lancy's face was bent low over a gun - Winchester styled, fine piece taken as part payment for the arrest of Clytus Hale - that son of a hump. Lancy had no particular love of the weapon - but he was mighty proud of some of the dances he'd been to with that lady on his arm.

"Got a fine barn-swing now coming up - and I aint mistaking..." Lancy was polishing the barrels, his face emerging through the dun as it cleared. "Or a polka maybe," laughing. "Either way," he studded his reflection - now vivid in the metal, "shiny."

And not long in the waiting neither.

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"Hey!" Mal banged hard on the door to the Washburn/Alleyne suite. "You got my pilot stashed away in there some place, Zoë?"

Reynolds shifted impatiently, folding his arms. He could hear vague sounds from within. Just as he was about to knock some more, Mal heard Zoe's voice.

"My mistake Sir, I took this hot young thing to be my lawful wedded, guess I was wrong."

Mal was in no mood for this. "Guess you were. Tell Wash to -"

"Tell me yourself Mal." Wash appeared in the doorway, a little ruffled. On its own that told little, Wash was ruffled incarnate - but the air coming out the door was a tad, uh, ripe. Mal concentrated on the annoyed looking face of his pilot.

Wash was annoyed, ofte

Comments
Tuesday, 29 April 2008 12:33
Do I sense a smidgen of 'Needful Things' a-happenin'? I'm never happy with mysterious shopkeepers... :)

*Scurries back to a certain situation, involving big flying rocks*
2X2
Tuesday, 29 April 2008 13:23
All kinds to keep my interest :oD

Wonderin' on what the significance of the Oil is.
Wonderin' on just who this 'Toymaker' is, shrewd fellow an' all. I too had a quick 'Needful Things' flash, crossed with the Leprechaun of all things, picturing him as something off his very own shelves *G* .Worried that Kaylee's left on her own and might come upon the happenin's in Serenity unawares... course, that might give Wash the opportunity to do something stupid and heroic *GRIN*

You're style is wonderful, as always. Did notice, second paragraph - ships ought to be ship's ;o) just fyi there. But I'm enjoying this a lot! Thank-you!
Tuesday, 29 April 2008 19:32
I am enjoying all the possibilities this story has. I do have to admit (and it might just be me) that sometimes I have a bit of trouble following the transitions. I am wondering where River got off to. I also am eager to find out more about the oil and the toymaker. Don't make us wait too long for the next one please.
Wednesday, 30 April 2008 03:34
Interesting development for Nandi's crew. Looking forward to seeing how everything fits together.

Also liked Kaylee & Book's scene. It's always good to have Book in fics.
Wednesday, 30 April 2008 18:39
Absolutely LOVED your opening description!!

"between the splinters of light and down below the curvature of the red apple moon"
"his boat smeared between the lunar ring"

WHOA... I feel like I write with crayons now.

The rest was good too;)

Excellent voices.

Do I detect a bit of 'clockwerk' in our mysterious shopkeeper? For some reason I kept picturing and hearing Bigweld when reading the shopkeeper.
Tuesday, 06 May 2008 11:48
I'm betting that the Toymaker and the barrels of oil are connected, it being the kind of thing he would be wanting for his automata. That is, if all the barrels are full of oil and we don't know if they are yet. I fell about at Wash trying to improvise being all fierce and Captain-y in the face of the posse. Not sure if they are a legal bunch but curious why they want the Captain not River and Simon, so it can't be Hands of Blue pulling their strings. And Nandi's death causing that kind of fall out is just such a neat twist but part of me feels annoyed with Sheydra for thinking she can just drop it all in Inara's lap and expect her to sort it out. Can't wait for the next part! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

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