Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

Bell, Book and Candle Pt 3

Tuesday, May 6, 2008

new chapter: Pt 3 of 5. The crew held hostage, Mal off to settle a score, Book in a very strange shop...

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3833    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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apologies for delay - been away!

this story is set just prior to Those Left Behind.

firefly credit this time therefore goes to Joss and Brett.

Three: Exile on Main Street.

The Serenity has landed at the township of Candle.

Zoë, Wash and Simon are at gun-point from a posse sent after Mal.

Inara is in her shuttle. Jayne is in the bath. River is - somewhere...

Kaylee is walking through town on her way back from visiting a strange shop.

Book is still there, with the owner, Jossiah Bell.

Mal meantime is on his way to find out why a job for the Drayton family has seen Serenity take onboard a cargo of oil that was meant to be wine.

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Splashing unhappily in the blackening water of his bath, Jayne was glad of the earplugs he always wore in the tub. Kept out the Captain and the crew and the whole go tsao de Jayne - do this - Jayne do that - crisis, danger, emergency - heavy lifting - nice and simple. Just a muted background - ship's speakers most like. Normally Cobb hated the bath, didn't seem natural sometimes - and - hell on a hump! - trying to get the lousy oil off his skin was a pain in the fay-fay ... Still, he was glad of the chance to avoid whatever job he was being yelled for. He ducked under the water again - no mean feat, man of his size. Then he rose to spit a fountain of liquid, one of his favourite tricks. Well, that was the plan... like ever, turned out to end in a messy splutter of coughing and swallowing and "GAH!"

Gazing down through the black of the ceiling vent, River's face was luminously clear, her eyes placid and watching. Jayne slapped water, hard. "Girl!" he yelled, "you got a need to keep - gorram! - why are you - DOING this!"

"Can't clean the insides," River said.

"Huh?" Jayne was still wearing his ear-plugs of course, wouldn't made much of a difference though - gibberese that crazy filly liked to come out with. "Stop watching me!" Jayne shouted. He pawed the air with one hand and ripped an ear-pl

Comments
Tuesday, 06 May 2008 12:23
Ha, I knew the toymaker and oil were connected. Oooh, very slippery evil man but I'm thinking he is also part machine. Maybehaps he was an experiment his own self and is thus connected to the automatons. That would be neat. And poor Book, what will become of his now? As for the posse, hopefully in the next chapter we will find out not only what that warrant says but who authorised it. The only bit that felt a bit off was having the Captain charge into the house and act like a complete stupid oaf. Going to query what had happened with the barrel and how it was oil not wine is also a ticklish business given as everything was sealed and it might be considered he opened the barrel rather than Jayne breaking it by accident. So, all our heroes in peril again. You certainly have a lot of very interesting threads at play. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 06 May 2008 12:42
Definitely a fahng-tzong fung-kwong duh jen, and I can't wait for you to unwind it! But ... did the story come first or the title?
Tuesday, 06 May 2008 13:22
Spirits to enforce, art to enchant? Bring on the Golden dawn, my friend.

But I could do without the mental picture of Jayne in a nightie. Or the scary tin monkey with the sonic disruptor field. Does he play cards too?



Tuesday, 06 May 2008 21:10
been reading these and they rock....very good.
Saturday, 30 August 2008 01:14
What an absolutely INCREDIBLE read!! I am totally blown away by your descriptions,use of quotes and creation of very valid sounding quotes.

Mal and our fovorite crew aside, your Book and Bell scenes were what sealed it for me...

EXCELLENT!!

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