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The Wages of Sihnon - CONCLUSION

Monday, March 17, 2008

CONCLUSION
Inara and Saffron are on Sihnon, attending a ceremony between Companions and Shepherds. Radha Brook and Phil Yip are also there investigating some missing girls.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3857    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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The Wages of Sihnon

Pt 6 - Fireworks -

Shepherd Neame was watching the neophyte Companion he knew as Sidhi very carefully, studying her walk. It was a very individual walk - or at least it struck him as being so. Sidhi moved with an almost adolescent carriage, head down and her long arms trailing even she quick stepped on the balls of her feet - an almost bouncing motion. Of all the things in the wide and wild 'verse - Shepherd Neame was thrown for a moment back to his childhood - a young boy scampering along the sea drenched coves beyond the rolling Downs that would later be his home.

It was a holiday memory, there had been a festival that day he recalled - strange rituals re-enacted in the narrow coastal town, dancing men, and decorations. He had been frightened - kicking up a fuss until he was allowed to leave - to go to the cove - to run free as his nature wanted. And there he was - squinting up at the low sandy cliffs and the brisk moving clouds - when something caught his eye. A sudden blur of moving colour that revealed itself finally as a bunch of balloons. Tied together with a glittery twine, they had escaped nonetheless from the hands of the festival-goer that must have been holding them. Like the young Neame, these balloons had fled the town, skipping and dancing down the sandy cliff trails and heading towards the sea - clashing together with a clumsy sort of beauty, bouncing from rock to rock as the wind carried them, lifting them up and setting them down.

It seemed a strange impression, ridiculous - but, (and no doubt in part due to the silks of her clothing) Shepherd Neame looked at the woman he knew as Sidhi - and he could think of nothing else.

"What?" He realised she'd been speaking.

"Nothing," she said quickly with that soft voice of hers, "it's only foolishness."

"Please," said Neame - all too aware that he was hurrying slightly to catch up along side her in the wide stone hall.

"I was just thinking how brave you must be."

Neame looked confused - the lines on

Comments
Monday, 17 March 2008 15:04
It doesn't suck... actually it rocks!! I've been reading this all along and the two things which impressed most were how you wrote Inara and Saffron. You made it so real with Inara's determination and Saff's brainy character, you could literally imagine them on screen. One more thing is description - seeing all your other fics, this one is the best 'cause you gave certain details on where they were that in other stories you would'a just skipped... so well done with a big grin!!!

Keep flying ;)
Monday, 17 March 2008 18:10
Okay, I enjoyed it. I still didn't necessarily understand it (but that's my fault, not yours) but it worked. Good job.
2X2
Monday, 17 March 2008 21:11
Well!
I'm going to have to send you a message to make sure I got everything that was going on in this part. I *think* I get it all, but I should probably read it all over again so that I can piece everything together.

Loved Saffron toying with Neame, poor fellow :oD And the scene between her and Inara, or should I say Inara and the plant?

And poor Yip! They got him too. I was sad!

Liked Radha clubbing Akiko Jones *G* Inara took a bit of a beating!! *pets Inara*

Loved Inara's own little intrigue. Oh the secrets she must have on that disc! And the House Mother... she just can't see the big picture beyond her own pettiness.

Overall, it was one wild ride, and a great story, and over far too short! Seriously, I could stand to read a whole lot more of this! I think your image of Sihnon is going to influence me everytime I think about the great city, that wall especially. Well done!

Well, I certainly hope that you will not shy away from penning Inara in the future. I thouroughly enjoyed this and would love to see more, in whatever capacity.

Do write again soon! (after a well deserved break of course ;o)
Wednesday, 19 March 2008 02:43
I really enjoyed this series! I especially loved your take on Guild life. And, of course, fics featuring Inara are my fav.

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