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The wages of Sihnon pt 4 (of 6)

Friday, March 7, 2008

Inara has been summoned to Sihnon to liaise in meetings between the Shepherds and the Guild. Meantime some trainee companions are missing and GIA Agent Radha and Private 'Tec Phil Yip are investigating. Saffron appears to be in cahoots with Inara and is disguised as a novice companion.
This chapter - a nosy journalist and the High Priestess.

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The Wages of Sihnon

Several Dances - pt 2

The Great Temple of Sihnon, formally dedicated to Kuan-Yin the Bodhisattva of Compassion, did not have a prison yard, or a dungeon, or cells. What the opulent structure did have though was rooms, a plethora of them:

Great rooms, state rooms, sunlit chambers for the playing of music, the rehearsal of dance, ritual, the making and taking of tea. There were meeting rooms, greeting rooms, classrooms and closets. Whole sprawling wings dedicated to boudoirs - and further wings dedicated to the theory and practise of what to do in them. The Temple housed rooms for meditation, prayer and religious instruction. There were rooms set aside simply to store the furniture for used in all the other rooms. The Temple boasted rooms for cooking, rooms for eating and rooms in which to digest. Reading rooms and exercise rooms and rooms whose purpose was long forgot.

Every room had a door. Every door could be locked.

In just such a room, (that was neither a cell nor part of a dungeon) a woman who had asked an impertinent question was sitting on a large divan and wondering if she'd get her camera back. Her name was Akiko Jones and to most people she would admit to being a journalist - she was not prone to admit much else. She was thinking about her camera and she was waiting. It was something just shy of an hour before her first visitor arrived.

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Inara Serra was standing next to the woman she knew as Saffron as the pair shared the tiny earpieces of the bugging device. Unfortunately, this meant the two women had to be in close physical proximity at all times. As a consequence Inara's face began to ache from the effort of heavy glaring - and Saffron's mouth had kept up a malicious grin for so long it was becoming a nervous tic.

It was clear that the Abbott had no immediate plans to chat with anyone, they could hear him pacing meditatively and that was all.

Saffron snapped first. "Whatever it is that's o

Comments
Friday, 07 March 2008 13:53
All right ... why does the High Priestess sound like a certain psychic of our acquaintance? I love your descriptions, and look forward to more!
NBZ
Friday, 07 March 2008 16:31
Brilliant!

I can see it coming together nicely. No idea what "it" is, but well... brilliant!
2X2
Friday, 07 March 2008 17:00
Quite enjoyed your description of the commencement of the grand ceremony, the beauty, the ceremony, the smells, all the planning the Mistress of Ceremonies went to... lovely.

I am so very intrigued to know just what Saffron is up to - and what Inara has got up her sleeve too.. and what all happened before that you are dropping these hints about in bits and pieces.. And what are the gifts!?! So many questions ;o)
Friday, 07 March 2008 18:51
This is great, wytch. A lovely mix of description and banter with plenty of scene shifting to keep us on our toes.

My fav bit:
"We're gonna get you some courage, me a heart and Kris a brain - then we can all go home to Kansas." made me chuckle.

I felt more atuned to the characters Yip and Radha in this, they are certainly filling out.
Friday, 07 March 2008 20:04
Shepherd Neame ?!

Well, I suppose we already have a Badger. Is there a sidekick called Tanglefoot anywhere? :)

And Akiko is missing her CAMRA...

Saturday, 08 March 2008 01:57
Inara telling Saffron that she should show Mal some respect... ironic, but believable in a post Miranda scenario, and Saffron lying to Inara as to why she choose Monty...hilarious.

There are too many great lines in here to quote just one. And Inara missing and thinking about Kaylee, sweet. Make your way back to Serenity Inara, where you belong because everyone know, there is no place like home.

love this story and will be looking for more

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