Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

Spiritual pt 3

Wednesday, January 30, 2008

Whilst Mal and the Crew chase down a debt as owed - Simon considers the nature of indepedence

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Chapter 3:

Independence, thought Simon Tam. The Captain had been the one to rename the former Mr Universe’s moon. Independence – yes, it was pure Malcolm Reynolds. The man had a way of hitting a nerve even while viewing all around him through the single eye of his war experiences. Independence – Reynolds had fought, near died – watched many, many others die – for a confused cause rallied together under the banner of… Independence.

And it was a joke too – a pun on so many levels.

There had been a moment – a turning point – for Simon it was Beaumonde. Racing into the devastation of the maidenhead bar – too late to save lives – too late to prevent his own sister from taking them – snuffing out the motley denizens of the bar as if it was just a workout at the gym – or a puzzle, fitting the pegs into their holes. A game.

He had done what he could – brought sister back from the brink – using a particular phrase to make her sleep, hypnotic suggestion? Magic charm? But that was not the turning point exactly – there had been a moment – a single and precise moment – it transformed all the moments after – running through or beneath every decision, every argument – every choice, every conversation – like a sort of electricity. Even now it still made the hair on Simon’s prickle like gorse.

And it had been the Captain. Malcolm Reynolds – hard hearted, smooth faced, gun totin’ space piratical ex-soldier Malcolm Reynolds… picking Simon’s sister up – picking River up from the floor where she lay unconscious – picking her up in his arms .

And so - change.

………………………..

Things never seemed to change much, thought Zoe as she leaned in close behind Mal – as she inclined her head – as she straightened her gun arms out, fanning in two directions and as she whispered into the Captain’s ear. “We still walking softly Sir?”

Mal shrugged. “I’ll admit that running softly just entered my mind but…”

We must make quite a sight and there’s a truth, the Captain thought to himself.

It was indee

Comments
Wednesday, 30 January 2008 13:18
There is something about the image of Mal leading the Reavers that gets to me ... and I can see it being used by certain fanatical types! He does seem to attract them, doesn't he? I'm still somewhat confused with some of the timeline/characters, but it's fun!
Wednesday, 30 January 2008 22:34
Shooting Jayne in front of his Ma, big mistake. Not a mom I know that wouldn't stomp him stupid for that and I bet Jaynes Ma is a bit tougher than the ones I know.
Thursday, 31 January 2008 01:47
Simon's reflections were interesting, as were River's summation on what she is, both being subtly sad.

And the mob's reaction to Mal, the Reaver Resonator, was quirky and unexpected.

Jayne's been a bad boy for not wearing his hat, love that!

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