INT. SERENITY BRIDGE
Mal stands at the rear of the bridge, arms crossed, muttering. River sits in the pilot's chair, pressing buttons and flipping switches, preparing for takeoff.
RIVER: He's a good man, Captain.
MAL: Well, if he turns out to be an Alliance mole who fancies shootin' at girls for fun, that'll just have to be on your conscience. And he better not have much junk to haul or it goes out the airlock.
RIVER:(smiling)He's lived like a monk for months. Everything he owns would fit in a locker. And he despises guns.
MAL:Just the same, he'd better not cause no ruckus. I ain't in the mood.
Zoe walks onto the bridge, a small satisfied smile on her face.
ZOE: All of our newest passenger's things are on board, sir. We're ready to fly.
MAL: (gruffly) Damn right we are. River, take us out of...
With a graceful heave, Serenity leaps from the ground and tears into the sky.
Mal and Zoe reach out a hand to the nearest bulkhead for support, though little is needed, the takeoff being so smooth.
MAL: That's still a mite unsettlin'.
INT. SERENITY PASSENGER BUNK
Paul is unpacking a large plastic container. He tenderly removes three Bonzai trees and places them on a shelf. He then places his clothes in the available drawers. A small electronic device he places on a shelf near the bed. He presses a button on the device and soft stringed music fills the small room.
Paul closes his eyes and listens.
INT. SERENITY DINING AREA
Simon and Kaylee sit at the table, sharing a quiet meal. Kaylee is smiling at something Simon said when Jayne enters.
JAYNE: Hey, lovebirds. Save any grub for the rest of us?
KAYLEE: By “us” you mean “you.” Yeah, there's a nibble left.
Jayne grins like a schoolboy and charges into the kitchen, banging around for a minute.
JAYNE: A nibble? This ain't a even a bite!
Kaylee simply closes her eyes and shakes her head while Simon squeezes her hand with a smile.
JAYNE: You got cookin' detail this week, girl. Why ain't you co
I love the conversation between Mal and River. The dialogue just rings so true.
Very nice writing on all of this so far!
You can't take the sky from me
Definitely found this chapter to be hilarious...especially Mal's line about Jayne being the first person to not emit anything resembling brainwaves;D
BEB
I should be a good reader and comment on the writing or some such....but honestly, this chapter just made me miss Wash. And significant strangers on Serenity always rub me the wrong way....either they're going to betray someone or try to fill the shoes of a former crew member....grrrr. I guess I'm almost as protective of that ship and her crew as Mal.OMG... That had to have been the funniest part so far.
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