Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

A Mighty Thorn In a Mighty Paw - Ch. 9

Monday, October 9, 2006

A screenplay taking place not long after the events of "Serenity."

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INT. SERENITY BRIDGE

River sits at the pilot's console, typing on the main keyboard and checking the scope to her left. Simon is standing, leaning against the doorframe, arms crossed. He doesn't look happy.

RIVER:(distracted) Scan's negative.

Simon uncrosses his arms and approaches River. She turns her back to him.

SIMON: River...

RIVER: When will you trust me, Simon? What will it take?

SIMON: I do trust you, River. It's the rest of the galaxy I have little faith in.

RIVER: He's telling the truth. Every word. I was there, you know.

SIMON: I'm sorry, mei-mei.It just seems that at every turn we run into someone trying to snatch you away from me again.

River relaxes a bit.

RIVER: Simon, I need you to trust me. I think the time has come. In fact, I know it has.

Simon nods.

INT. SERENITY DINING ROOM

Kaylee stands in the kitchen area, preparing a meal. Inara sits at the main table with Paul. He is drinking a glass of water while Inara looks him over.

INARA: How long have you been here?

PAUL: A few months. It took the Alliance some time, but they managed to weed out most of those who aided in River's escape. They hadn't yet discovered my involvement. (bows his head) May Buddha have mercy on those souls who didn't break under the pressure I'm sure they endured.

Inara places a hand on his, aware of his personal anguish that he'll never fully exhibit.

INARA: Most will never understand the emotional sacrifice our respective lives demand of us.

Paul allows a small smile and nods. Kaylee approaches the table, bowl in hand, and sits across from Paul.

KAYLEE: What are you gonna do now?

PAUL: I'm not sure what you mean.

KAYLEE: Well, now that you and River are reunited, why don't you sail with us?

Inara is taken aback by Kaylee's blunt question. Paul simply looks at her, emotionless.

PAUL: I hadn't considered that. I didn't think it was an option. I haven't even met your captain yet.

KAYLEE:(with a dismissive wave) You and he'll get al

Comments
Monday, 09 October 2006 03:36
Hmmm...consult with a physician? Is Mal ailing, or does he just need to smack Simon upside the head for something?

You write just enough in every chapter to keep us eagerly awaiting the next one:)
Monday, 09 October 2006 09:17
Oh, I know now why you keep us so hanging for more.

It's not the mystery..well maybe it is but it's because your outright evil!

Your so good at baiting me, it ain't right!
Monday, 09 October 2006 19:51
Why does Mal need a physician, is there a body lying at his feet? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 12 October 2006 01:09
Oh...what has Mal found in the dirt? Cuz I can just picture Nathan/Mal's face right now: calmly flabbergasted and smirk curling up at the thought of harrassing Simon;)

BEB
Sunday, 18 February 2007 07:51
JAYNE: So, where we headed?
MAL: Straight into the lions' den.

Ohhh! You have a knack for lines that make my adrenaline rush a tad ;) I really liked the quiet exchange between Paul and Inara. You have Inara's voice down well.

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