Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

A Mighty Thorn In a Mighty Paw Ch. 6

Sunday, October 8, 2006

A screenplay taking place shortly after the events of "Serenity."

Thanks and thanks some more to Joss Whedon for creating this 'verse we've all come to love living in.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3083    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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INT. SERENITY COMMON AREA (ADJ. TO INFIRMARY)

As everyone takes a seat, Kaylee comes bouncing down the steps and drops onto the couch next to Simon.

KAYLEE: Coast is clear.

Paul remains standing, though River takes the chair nearest to him.

SIMON: I suppose my first question is, how did you end up here?

PAUL: Anonymously. This planet isn't exactly the... pinnacle of Alliance accomplishment. A few struggling farmers, some low-level ne'r-do-wells. I simply faded into the tapestry.

INARA: I speak for everyone here when I ask what part you played in freeing River. Obviously you're privy to information that Simon finds shockingly accurate.

Paul nods, opens his mouth to reply...

SIMON: I can say with the utmost certainty that I've never seen you before. I only met with select people from the movement, and they never mentioned a “sifu.”

Paul starts to pace a few steps back and forth, hands clasped behind his back.

PAUL: I'll start at the very beginning, insofar as my involvement is concerned. I first met River through a man named Dr. Mathias.

INT. TRAINING ROOM

Wide view of Paul and River meeting in a large, simple yet elegant training room. Dr. Mathias is gesturing toward River, his hands moving emphatically. Silent scene except for...

PAUL (VO): He turned out to be one of the primary doctors working with River. He claimed he wanted her to be able to defend herself in any situation. Hand to hand. Blunt, bladed, and throwing weapons. Even firearms. I was training certain Alliance Military Elite at the time,(CU of Mathias and Paul, Mathias appears especially emphatic. Paul is serene) but was told to clear my schedule in order to focus solely on River.

INT. SERENITY COMMON AREA

Paul is still pacing, but he pauses and looks down at River, smiling proudly

PAUL: Our lesson proceeded like any other I'd conducted, for the first day, anyway. When River returned the next day, she flawlessly performed every technique she'd learned the day before, moving from stance to stanc

Comments
Sunday, 08 October 2006 05:07
Wel we all knew River was a genius but Damn! Two and a half weeks! I know I shouldn't be surprised by this, but here I am...surprised.

Can't wait 'til Mal and the other gets back..should be an interesting confrontation.
Sunday, 08 October 2006 09:49
This was brilliant, I especially like the phrase 'every weapon I handed her became an organic extension of her body'. What a superb and clinically chilling description of River at her most deadly. And yet. I can't bring myself to trust Paul. Why is he there? And what is his agenda? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 08 October 2006 14:06
Help! You're posting so fast I can't keep up (panting, sound of running feet)! Nicely done again!
Sunday, 18 February 2007 07:43
Very nice - you paint a picture of what is happening in the scenes very well.

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