Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

The Way of Jayne, Part 7

Sunday, January 29, 2006

NC17. Sex with a minor (Jayne). If you can't take it, please do NOT read it. All Church Ladies and whiners will be thoroughly dealt with. You have been warned.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3683    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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The Way of Jayne, Part 7

His darkened steel eyes caught and held her own jade green in locked question and answer. His query got a sure reply when she closed her eyes and exhaled strongly while moving into him just enough to tell him what he needed to know. Even at 14 years old, inexperienced in what men and women wanted from each other, he easily read in Maeve her desire to give and take, to go further into him, into his desires and hers.

Jayne’s large hands went to her shoulders where he eased the robe off her till it caught on her large firm breasts. Brow furrowed in frustration at the hitch, he remembered the tied belt and took his fingers there to free her body from the garment. Making quick work of the tie, he spread the pretty material open and looked his fill at her naked firelit torso there in Maeve’s sitting room.

“Gods, Maeve, you’re ruttin’ beautiful,” he breathed, his pupils enlarging in pleasure, his mouth going suddenly dry with ratcheting want.

She smiled and blushed the slightest bit at the smoky voice of the man at whose legs she knelt, smiled wider at the fully grown man’s look on his swai face. Reaching a hand up to trace his jawline she continued the gesture to the back of his head, drawing him down to her bosom.

Jayne had no reason to struggle, not when she was taking him where his eyes and mouth wanted to go.

On contact he rubbed his shaven cheek along the valley between her breasts before sliding back up to breathe on one nipple already tightly ruched in expectation of his caress. He’d never seen one this close-up before but didn’t feel inclined for looking so much as tasting, so he did.

When his warm mouth touched her sensitive tip, then opened wider to tug on her there, Maeve moaned and inhaled sharp and sudden-

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 29 January 2006 04:55
tzao-gau!
Sunday, 29 January 2006 06:39
Completely and utterly worth the wait. You write Jayne SO well!

I love the explanation you gave for why he doesn't kiss- deep down I always hoped it was something like that.

Sunday, 29 January 2006 10:11
So very tender... *sigh* Beautiful stuff.

No kissin' without love, huh? Very telling given the later-set stories.
Sunday, 29 January 2006 13:30
Wow! It was worth waiting for!

Very nicely done Wash.

I loved it, the attraction between the two is wonderfully written.

Some great word pictures here.

"She smiled and blushed the slightest bit at the smoky voice of the man at whose legs she knelt, smiled wider at the fully grown man’s look on his swai face"

I'd be smiling too!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 30 January 2006 14:11
...“You too?,” he asked after a decent interval...

yeah, me too

Whew!

That's our Jayne - man does a job, he sets his mind on doin' it right.

Well done, ItsaWash, and thanks.
Monday, 30 January 2006 19:43
Yo, 'Wash,

That last "anonymous" was me. Gorram comment postin' machine left off my handle. Didn't want you to go feelin' unappreciated.

Hisgoodgirl
DARKANGELLOVESFIREFLY
Tuesday, 31 January 2006 04:28
At the moment all I have to say is tzao-gau but I'll be back later to shower complements on you for your wonderful writing.

ItsaWash you are freaking amazing!!!!!!!!

I cant wait to see more from you.
Thursday, 02 February 2006 07:21
DAMN, Piper! That freakin' ROCKED!!!

I mean.....SHIITE!! *cheers and applauds you as loudly as is physically possible*
Saturday, 11 February 2006 15:47
ok, so after five attempts, two weeks and three PCs, i finally managed to read it the whole way through and boy, do you keep your promises or what!!!

b
Friday, 28 April 2006 13:16
Yay for redheads with green eyes, yay for Maeve, and yay for smut involving her and Jayne.

If you wanted opinions on where it should go, here's mine. Jayne and Wood continue their rustling, but eventually get caught, and the punishment is so bad that Jayne wants to go offworld to get away from it, which he does with Maeve's help. Maybe that's an obvious path, but it's my $0.02.
Wednesday, 03 May 2006 11:33
Lord, girl, but you've made me want another virgin so bad...

I'd love to collaborate on a project together.
Friday, 26 May 2006 02:09
I love the 14 year old Jayne-first time-with-a-woman speak!

Loved these lines special-good!

“Gods, Maeve, you’re ruttin’ beautiful,”

“Christ, Maeve, you’re wet, but not like water. Like…sunwarm grease?,”

“So you’re ready to be penetrated?,”

I can just see Jayne, words running through his young inexperienced mind, trying to find the right thing to say...while he's fumbling around physically trying to find the right thing to do.

Fabu-loso Washito!
Monday, 07 August 2006 18:58
Fabulous piece of writing for Jayne's first time. Tender and yet desperate to get it done as so many young people are prone to do.

As young as he is, I assume Maeve knows she'll have no trouble getting him off a few more times that night.

Interesting reason for him not to kiss on the mouth as we know he doesn't do from the series.

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