RIVERISMYGODDESS

Wednesday, 12 July 2006 22:54

*His body was replete, satisfied for the first time since he hit puberty a few years gone, the cause for the fullness of feeling lay in the bed back there. Jayne was in love, full-on, stupidly, completely in love with Maeve Burlee, town herbwoman, reader, calm and patient instructress in the arts of love to a rawboned ignorant cattle rustler barely out of the schoolroom.*
Loved this descriptive bit here, great lines.

Maeve's Reader abilities and her connection with the young Jayne have certainly grown recently.

*Inga's family crest*
Eerie and very cool description of the symbol with many meanings in many different cultures.

I loved this chapter, even in it's rough draft form. I don't think I could do that, being as anal-retentive as I am about spellings and such. I loved everything here, it seemed like more of a transition chapter to me. Can't wait to see more of this excellent story luv.