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The Way of Jayne, Part 6

Saturday, January 21, 2006

This is your last chance for PG13 on this story, Friends and Browncoats. Jayne goes with his boss to the ho-house in this fic, and after that? Just you wait... (Part 7 is coming soon, today, I hope.)

MUCH thanks to GypsyLife, EngineAngel and LMD for their jing zi help and inspiration. I owe youse guys. Read on, Fair Readers, and FEEDBACK~oh please do~. It's the air that I breathe.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3470    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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The Way of Jayne, Part 6

Wood could be heard rummaging around in a closet, even from where Jayne still sat dumbfounded on the couch. The young man registered the noise his boss was making, knew the old reprobate was busily getting ready to go to the whorehouse, knew too, that he, Jayne (or “Bob,” as his cattle-rustling boss knew him by) was to go too.

“Fourteen years old and never even been kissed,” he muttered, staring at but not seeing the map half-drawn laid out on the coffee table, directions for their next heist. “And now I’m fixin’ to go mai bi my first woman with a walkin’cockroach along for the ride.”

It wasn’t that he didn’t appreciate the ambulatory insect’s suggestion, Hell, his young man’s libido was revving up to full speed the more he dwelt on the possibilities, the ruttin’ certainty of what tonight was gonna mean to him. It was more that he had no in-between. No shy flirting with town girls that would lead to self-assurance, and a way with them.

He’d had lots of attentions from young girls in the past several years, alright, just happened that all of it was bad. He knew he’d never ever forget the early education town girls had given him in school, voices taunting, laughing at him, beating him up inside for having a name that weren’t no way his fault in the first place. He frowned and felt like crying, turned it quickly to anger and hatred as a reflex against the weakness of almost wallowing in self-pity. Weakness of his soul where females was concerned wasn’t gonna be part of his manly make up. He’d make gorram sure of it, starting tonight, cao ni ma.

Today’s work was long done, but tonight, by god, no work. Nothin’ but playin’ in the ripe fields of professional womanhood. This sure knowledge was beginning to sink in, even though his mind wa

Comments
Sunday, 22 January 2006 02:20
Loved it!

Poor Jayne, that girl definitly dserves a whipping for that, losing good coin and a customer! Shame on her for what she did.

I really love this series, anything about Jayne's past that reveals how he became the big bad merc we all know and love(or hate depending on who you are..lol) But I definitly love Jayne and I love this story. Can't wait for the next part, you are such a tease! LOL!

Sunday, 22 January 2006 03:32
Yay! I've been waiting for part 6. And what a good continuation. Love how Jayne's horse loves him and hate the girl at the cathouse! Looking forward to part 7.
Sunday, 22 January 2006 03:50
Thank ya, Stormwolfdawn and bookaddict. Me too, on both those points. Glad it played okies for you too.

I'm SO excited to post the next part, and a little nervous too. Will be 7 kinds of anxious to see what you think. Thanks again.
Monday, 23 January 2006 01:27
Aw, poor baby Jayne. You actually made me want to jump into the story and comfort him when everyone started laughing. There's nothing worse than public humiliation, especially at such a tender age. I can see how this (seemingly small) experience might affect him later in life. You just keep peeling back those tight-bound layers of our big merc, and it all makes perfect sense in the context of how we know him later in the show/BDM.

I'm seven kinds of anxious to see the next part. If Measure of a Jayne was any indication, it's gonna be great. ;P
Wednesday, 25 January 2006 17:57
"Maeve envied his fingers"
MAEVE envies his fingers?

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DARKANGELLOVESFIREFLY
Thursday, 26 January 2006 04:14
ItsaWash you never cease to amaze!!!!

You are an amazing writer Keep it coming dear I can't wait for the next part!!


I must also add that as soon as I read the reaction of that gorram yin yang ren chou san ba I wanted to crawl inside my computer into the story and chou san ba slap her all the way back to Earth that was!!!

Thank you so very much for all the entertainment that your stories have provided me!
Thursday, 26 January 2006 16:58
Bless 'ya, ItsaWash, for such an artful description of this momentous and formative moment in our man's young life. There's so much more to the big guy than gun oil and poor impulse control...

All your fine stories have made things mighty lively on my ship lately ... Please keep 'em (and him) coming.

Saturday, 28 January 2006 23:24
You rock, Piper!! This is awesome...

Hurry up with the rest!!

(Poor Jayne...)
Friday, 28 April 2006 11:21
These are just me being picky:

"down his hair form crown to ears,"

If you are editing these for correctness, I think you meant to type from here instead of form.

"but was in no wise used to it,"

in no way used to it maybe ?

Jayne-Thomas still makes me smile every time I read it (makes me think of a particular scene in 'Heart of Gold' as well).

"when fear and excitement are felt strongly, simultaneously, the best times in one’s life were the cause"

Too true, too true.
Friday, 28 April 2006 11:57
"carried carefully in her hans she"

hand

I like where this is going. :)
Friday, 28 April 2006 23:55
Thanks again for the edit assistance, River. You'd make a right-fine beta! (All's well now.)
Friday, 26 May 2006 01:41
Poor young Jayne...such a tragedy, his corruption at the hands of Wood.

The words had barely left his lips when his boss blew him out of the water by coming out of the bedroom wearing clean clothes and… women’s perfume? Yeah, it was something fruity-smelling. It didn’t make the filthy man smell any better, exactly, rather it caused his habitual rotten onion smell to take on an apple blossom addition *tries to imagine the smell...hmmmm...ugh*

he manfully saluted his boss with the small glass, tipped back his head till his face was nearly parallel with the ceiling and shot the burning liquid down his throat. His eyes nearly crossed and his gullet burned with the fire of it, but he managed to mask most of the effects by wiping the back of one hand across his eyes, sweeping away a lock of thick hair in the process. *this was such a good description of someone who's downing their first shot of a hard liquor, loved it*

“You want mai bi, Bao bei? Got coin to buy sweet ji bai, Big Boy?” *Cheap! Cheap! Me love you LOONNGG time*

Women. They weren’t much different from girls, it turned out. Girls had always been evil toward him, small tormenters, pointing out the shame of his girlified name. Didn’t know why he weren’t smart enough to realize earlier that women were the same, but wait. *great job at taking his mind back to where his insecurities and shame took root*

This is so very, very good Washie...

On to Part 7.....
Monday, 07 August 2006 18:37
Poor Jayne. And that doesn't come out of my mouth often! LOL!

That whore should have been beaten just for the loss of coin she cost herself and her madame.

Jayne's reflection that women weren't any better than girls was just great and ties this chapter in splendedly to the very first one where he is lamenting the girls that had been making fun of his name.

I do like how you got Jayne to Maeve's place and how, even then, the pace slowed to what we all know will be the inevitable outcome.

All still very well described and very entertaining.

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