The Train Job, Duet, Part 1
They met on a train. In the tunnel on a fast moving maglev, as a matter of fact. She wasn’t good at geography, paid little attention to what point on a map she existed on at any given time. He had it all down pat, knew where he was, what he was, who he was always, but in the darkness as they collided the terrain he found himself pressed against had no resemblance to anything on a cartographer’s best map.
When they first touched, when their bodies connected front to front, their warm mingled breath shooshed out of them right into one another’s faces. The combined senses of touch and scent got them acquainted in a hurry, neither finding the contact unwelcome.
In fear of being tumbled to the ground by the train’s motion and lost in the darkness she could not see through, she gripped the unknown man’s right hip and strong left shoulder for dear life. For his part, the man clasped her to his broad chest after encountering a round breast with one hand in a downward sweep. As if he’d been shocked by the soft yet firm contact, his hand ricocheted away from it, arms banded her to him in reaction.
But pulling her close only served to cause another reaction in him. Her body held tightly to his, not quite flush with his, more like his left chest serving as a perch for the valley between her breasts, he felt that very clearly, her stomach and lower held against his hip. Her pubic bone was flush with his thigh, and as the train rocked, rocketed through the longest darkest tunnel in Europe, where her sex and his leg met there was a sly rhythmic slide back and forth. Their feet stood firm, especially since they stood as one, lending support to each other as the rocking continued.
She was gripped to his body now. Before they’d settled like this, her stone solid against him, safe from falling by his whole body’s grasp, his first touch had been accomplished by his hand as it swept her front in a hard caress. Even in the dark it was possible to see that his cupping her breast w
I'm not really sure who they're supposed to be, could be anyone really, and I'll let my mind fill in the blanks with my own favourite pairing...
It's the V-neck shirt that seems a big clue to me, and the clothes and subtle cologne of good quality... hmmm maybe it's ... Book!?? that would be fun, and evil!
"Cunt" is a bit problematic to use as a descriptor since it's so ladden with insulting double-meaning. Sounds fairly aggressive. "Pussy" on the other hand sounds almost too soft and playful, but it's better.
It's no wonder erotica is so riddled with funny euphemisms, it's so complicated to hit the right note with those words, lol!
My guess would be for the woman... Saffron? She's one that strikes me as saucy enough to be this character.
The man is neither Mal, Wash, Simon or Jayne. The first three for lack of chest hair, the latter for lack of finery.
Book, could certainly be!
Oh, what about Book/Patience in the past? :D
Or the cop and his female assistent from "The Train Job".
Daddy and Mommy Tam when they met?
Saffron and Monty?
So difficult! *g*
But otherwise, very compelling. No idea who they could be, but I want to know.
Great Job! And 10!
I bet Im the best review-er for someone who hasnt read the story. :P
Thanks for being honest. It helps to know one's public and be able to post accordingly! Keep flyin', y'all, and thanks for reading and having the guts to tell it like you feel it. :0)
If you want to be a good writer, then learn your craft. Anyone can write smut, but make it worth the reader's time if that's what you want to do.
I don't want to see our Firefly characters in porn.
You do have a way with words! And errr..body parts. :D
Hmmmm.... Who is it?
I've got no guesses at all at this point!
It's A Wash: Some really fantastic IMAGERY ('hint hint' Anonymous! *shakes head again*) in here. You've got me guessing, and probably guessing wrong, too. Mighty interested in finding that out. ;P
Because, see, replying to Anon myself would have sounded self-serving and prolly more than a little futile. But in you came, and rebutted better than I ever could have. Sigh. Bless you, my child. :0) Have as ruttin' fine a day as you've made mine, you hear?
b
p.s. i figured it was zoe and simon for some reason...but i'm dense so pay me no mind
I don't want to say it's my first guess, Mal and Zoe but, oh crap. I said it. I hope I'm wrong.
Hey Wash it's me again. On my second read, I naturally think it's my favourites, Kaylee and Jayne. Great images!
So this....I do know the pairing, and will leave it to you to guess, HOW I know.
*but in the darkness as they collided the terrain he found himself pressed against had no resemblance to anything on a cartographer’s best map.* For anyone who's spent even a moment on a train, this was a perfect description of the rocking in a train as two people try to hold themselves straight.
*She went thickly moist where they were connected below, flushed from her neck to her hairline at the realization that she was, that he might somehow know.* If he IS who I KNOW he IS than I can totally see this reaction in her.
*The pleasure he felt where they were connected mouth-to-mouth was a frightening thing, scary because he’d never felt anything quite like this before.* Perfect for this certain person, the innocence of this man.
Washie...my dear, I want to ride a train, this fic on my mind. Enter a dark tunnel, and just HOPE there is someone to fall into me.
Spacie.
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