Pieces: Ch 35-50.
Thursday, December 15, 2005
Sometimes pieces fit, sometimes they don't and sometimes they can't be put back together. Fourth installment for the Joss_100. Jayne and Kaylee.
CATEGORY: FICTION TIMES READ: 3346 RATING: 10.0 (NC17) SERIES: FIREFLY
The Fourth Installment.
Quick review to clear up any remaining questions: The Joss_100 is a challenge for fanfic writers (those who hate themselves enough to sign up, anyway) who follow a set table of 100 word prompts. Each word is supposed to 'prompt' a drabble or mini ficlet of between 100-1000 words.
I signed up for the Jayne/Kaylee pairing. And so far have completed 50 out of the 100 prompts. They're usually not connected, but I had to make it difficult and make it into a continuing fic for the whole 100. Yay me (I think?)
The whole table of prompts I have to follow can be found . And the previous installments can be found: , and . Disclaimer: Not mine. Joss'. Feedback: Oh, you know I want it, baybee. Comment (*please*) or send an email: wily_one24@yahoo.com.au Comment : NC-17, just so you know. Some of these prompts get *naughty*, so avert your eyes young ones. And, onto the fic... *** Prompt #035: Life. Words: 820. GIRLS 'N' GUNS. Jayne didn't want to clean his guns. His hand shook just a little as he rubbed the oil into the length of Cassie. Now that was a gun that could show you a good time, quick release, little to no recoil, she was somethin' to look at. Yes she was. "Jayne?" He breathed in. "Yeah?" Kaylee knelt up behind him and he closed his eyes for a second, let himself feel the weight of her dip his mattress down. Felt the heat of her near his back, she was so close that if he leant back even an inch, they'd be touching again. "You gonna stop playin' with those guns anytime soon?" No, not if he could help it. "I told ya, it's gotta be done." He wasn't about to tell her it had already been done hours before. Her whole body sighed
I've loved all of these so far and can't wait to see where the rest of it's gonna go, especially since some of the prompts coming up sound kinda ominous. Destruction, Apocalypse, Terror, Betrayal... Yeesh.
As long as you promise me a happy ending, though, I can handle the angst. ;P
I think the Inara/Kaylee scene was my favorite part. The Bubbles scene was lots of fun, too. Both had everything I love best about your writing. Love Jayne missing Vera as well.
Sure, you do angst and sexual frustration like no one else in the 'verse, but yay for silly Jacqui!
The River perspective was incredible. Particularly:
"Sometimes she wondered what her reality would look like if it ever remained linear, as it was written in the texts. If she could ever trust point A to lead her straight to point B without deviating through points X, G, M and back again.
Maybe her reality was linear and it was her memories that couldn't be trusted, maybe it was the way she pressed them into an order understandable to no one but herself."
And bonus points for using the word "mullishly."
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