Blue Sun Room FICTION - DRAMA

Something From Nothing 7/?

Thursday, March 30, 2006

James talks some more, maybe his parents can learn from his example?

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4424    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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There’s not much to say about this one, really. It just is.

Rating: G.

Disclaimer: Only one is mine, the rest belong to Joss.

Comments: Kaylee skipped a flashback or two? Bad Kaylee. I'm sure she'll get to them eventually.

Mouse over the Chinese for the translations.

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Chapter 7:

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“It ain’t nothin’.” Jayne frowned and tried to move away from her, but she pressed him down into the chair. “Kaylee, you don’t gotta…”

Her fingers trailed softly over the purple shoulder, his skin swollen and shiny. She did that to him, it was the last in a long line of things she’d done. The muscles shifted under her touch and she looked up to see him clenching his jaw.

“Don’t be such a jing xiao gou, Jayne.”

He glared and pouted, but sat still anyway as she applied the salve. It was automatic, the soft humming as she did it, the way she blew air through her lips to cool the sting.

Behind her, she could hear the soft, melodic sound of James talking to himself. It amused her, how easily he took to the ship, how much he’d made the shuttle home in just a few days. He busied himself checking all the nooks and crannies.

She’d gone straight to Inara’s shuttle as soon as they’d woken up and found them sitting up in bed, playing some game with their hands. It was still hard to accept, the realization that he didn’t need her so much, even if that was what she wanted. Wanted him

Comments
Thursday, 30 March 2006 11:21
OOoooo! Great writing as always! The content of the flashbacks are so creepy :O
Thursday, 30 March 2006 13:36
<“I’m his daddy, Kaylee.” He ran a hand through his hair. “But he don’t know that. So why don’t you tell me what he’s supposed to call me?”


“He could.” Her voice was hopeful and he couldn’t breathe. “He could know, if you wanted. That’s what I’m askin’.”>

Girl, so dear, so haunting.
Thursday, 30 March 2006 13:57
Let me get this straight, you've been sick and you still write this well? Wow.

Hope you're feeling better!

I held my breath as James went around naming everyone, waiting to get to Jayne! Can't wait until he calls him Daddy! *hand on heart*

I can feel the ending coming and I wish it could go on forever! It's my 'fix' for the day!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 30 March 2006 15:51
Ooooooooooh! I love it. I just LOVE it. I hope you are feeling better, and I look forward to the next chapter.

/M
Thursday, 30 March 2006 18:12
I LOVE how you stopped before letting us know what Jayne wants to be called. I'm sure I already know, but I want to hear him say it.

Hey! I just made a reference to the BDM without even tryin'!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 30 March 2006 18:35
James is so wise! And I'm very happy to see Kaylee appreciating Jayne and actually talking to him (especially the last scene).

If possible, this fic just gets more and more beautiful:

"She could remember so many years ago, lying in his arms, how gentle he’d been then. Remembered how much he’d given her, how little he’d asked back."

and funny:

“So, uh.” Jayne grinned. “Just how big an ow we talkin’ here? I gotta go get myself shot?”

I'll just sit right here and wait for the next installment.

-squish
Thursday, 30 March 2006 20:07
Wonderful! I'm glad you're back.

Thanks for that last dose of crack!
Friday, 31 March 2006 01:00
Yep...this some good quality fic right here. And angst to no end....though I gots to wonder if Jayne will need to give the mystery abuser a few lessons in manners or has Kaylee already handled that? Hmm...something for another chapter, perhaps?

;)

BEB
Friday, 31 March 2006 01:08
Bleh..I'm about to go over on LJ and review. Another excellent flashback! I think those are my favorite part...

"Stay away from him..." OOOOH! The angst! 10!10!
Friday, 31 March 2006 02:57
I do not get it - how's a guy get so wrong? Flashback Man, I mean. I desperately want Jayne to go back plantside and kill him.
That is, unless Kaylee already did it?
Anxiously awaiting answers to these questions and more...

Friday, 31 March 2006 02:59
Gah!!! Stupid not-typing-right fingers...
I meant "PLANETside" not "plant".
Though, on second thought, that actually sounds kinda cool.
Friday, 31 March 2006 04:41
yeah so i wanna kill this man already anyone else. doin a good job at makin him evil, i love it
Friday, 31 March 2006 07:07
Hope he's already dead, very violent and painful death, better be not alive anymore, what Jayne's wrath would do to him would be a lot worse than being raped, skinned alive and eaten by a bunch of Reavers...

I'm here holding my breath...the instant James will know and call Jayne "daddy".
I can see Jayne crying here.

Get well soon my dear Jacqui.

Tuesday, 30 May 2006 13:02
i REALLY don't like flashback man now, not that i ever liked him, but now i REALLY don't.

and yes, get better!!!

b

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