Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

The Best Deceptions: Ch 9

Friday, April 14, 2006

The crew of Serenity touch down on Kaylee's home planet. Hi-larity ensues. Jayne/Kaylee.

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Oh, dear lord, look! It's fluff. Fluffy, fluffy fluff! It's so soft and squishy, I can bounce off the walls of fluff.

After the huge delude of angst I've been pouring out lately, this makes me feel like a wide eyed, radioactive Mr. Burns...

"I bring you LOVE".

Disclaimer: Uh, yeah, some of them are Joss', some of them aren't. I'm sure you can work out which.

Rating: G. Seriously, fluffily, G.

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Comments: It's BACK!

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Chapter Nine :

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He hadn't ever really found himself looking at the ship when she landed. Well, there ya go, he thought, she really is impressive, quite a beauty. He had to tell Kaylee that, he knew it would make her preen. Wasn't an accident that he made sure he was inside the belly of the beast when she took off and, therefore, when she landed.

Never, not once, had he wondered what it was like on the other side, starin' at the big, blank panel that would open and become the ramp. Urging it to finally lower. What in the gorram hell were they doin' that took so long.

The ship was on the ground, for all that was holy, stop pussy footin' about and just dock already. It made him grin. In the back of his head he knew, knew how much time it took for the controls to be settled just so after landing, for

Comments
STARRBABY
Friday, 14 April 2006 01:54
OH! I"m, the first to comment!!! I love the ending with Kaylee's Ma treating Inara like a .. .*gasp* . . human.
GNAWEDWICK
Friday, 14 April 2006 01:55
yay yay yay, fluff is so fun and adds so much to your writins. id be hard pressed to read a stroy without fluff. an i thought jayne was gunna get in so much trouble with ma, and well i was right sweetness
VENA
Friday, 14 April 2006 01:57
I’ve been waiting for so long for this chapter. And I get to be one of the the very first ones to tell you just how shiny it is!!

Yes, it is fluff. Fluffy fluff.
I absolutely adore it. Thank you!! Well worth the wait and well written.

And in general, you rule. You know that right? Cause, Ya do.
GNAWEDWICK
Friday, 14 April 2006 01:57
yay yay yay, fluff is so fun and adds so much to your writins. id be hard pressed to read a story without fluff. an i thought jayne was gunna get in so much trouble with ma, and well i was right sweetness. this is a much needed fluff after your last angsty but wonderfull story
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 14 April 2006 02:55
YAY!!! an update lol. i've realy been lookin' forward to this for a while now. i love the fact that jayne is stringin' the whole crew along. it's more fun that way.
i loved that he introduced simon to mauralee. that's great lol!!
can't wait for the next update!!!
SQUISH
Friday, 14 April 2006 03:33
Fluff is good. It must be, it made me feel better from the flu.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 14 April 2006 05:30
Ahh This was great! I was grinning through the whole thing. Love, love, LOVED it. I can't stop gushing. I adore this story so much.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 14 April 2006 06:05
Fluffy stories are a good thing, and I just love this one
BRITCHICK
Friday, 14 April 2006 07:49
This is so great, I can't wwait for the next one! There were so many fab lines, I think one of my favourites is:

<I>"I'd say he needs fresh air." Wash joked. "But I think that's the problem."</I>

And one which made me all tingly (in an awwww shucks kinda way) was River's

<I>"I like you like this."</I>

More soon, pleeeeeeeease
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 14 April 2006 09:04
So much fluff I just want to reach out and give it a squeeze!
HISGOODGIRL
Friday, 14 April 2006 14:11
I loves jayne's chat with nana Kent:
<"You go on now an' I'll come meet those fancy folk tomorrow." Her eyes glittered. "And you best be lookin' after my Winnie. You hear?"


"Guess you ain't heard." His eyes glittered back. "She's my Winnie now.">

Fluff after angst is like sherbet between courses to cleanse the palate, and your fluff is as delightful as your angst is excruciating.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 14 April 2006 14:15
Grrreat!!!
BANZAIBILL
Friday, 14 April 2006 16:04
Something certainly agrees with Jayne :)

britchick and hisgoodgirl are both right on the money. This was a HUGE pleasure for me. After the the last few days I've had, it was like a little mini-vacation getting to go back to Kaylee's house.

I think I'll keep bouncing along in this happy place: "Little Billy Foo Foo, dancing through the forest, catching all the plot bunnies and giving them a hug". OK, maybe not that fluffy, but not far off. Thanks for the lovely, fluffy grin I'm wearing, Jacqui!
BLUEEYEDBRIGADIER
Friday, 14 April 2006 18:52
Well now....this was a shot of fresh air after a long haul inside a box;)

Just have to love a OTT Jayne....even more hilarious and loveable as his "I'm a hardass" mode:)

BEB
REENIE
Saturday, 15 April 2006 02:08
"I'd say he needs fresh air." Wash joked. "But I think that's the problem."

"You'll have to forgive 'em, Nana Kent." He replied, sounding as sad and wearisome as he could muster. "They's a little backwards sometime."

Possibly my two favorite lines you have EVER WRITTEN. Seriously. I was cracking up. I can sooo hear Wash and Jayne saying these things.

I loved the angst. I did. Now, though, I'm so loving the fluff. Welcome back, fluff!
PIXIE4MIRANDA
Saturday, 15 April 2006 12:09
Ohh..I wonder what Zoe would look like in an apron, and then I realized.. she could kill me with a pinky...

p4m
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 15 April 2006 13:59
you have no idea how euphoric I was to wake up to this, no idea.
--
“Womenfolk?” Zoe echoed.


“Just go with it, honey.” Wash grinned as he kissed her cheek. “I gotta go play with the other boys.”
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love it!
CANTONHEROINE
Tuesday, 18 April 2006 03:09
Whooot! *pumps fist*

This is a piece of brilliance right here. Jayne's mischeivous side is right there at the fore, and isn't it just so gorram cute and cuddlesome? The crew's reactions are hi-larious, and this dinner is really gonna be something to see.

Sorry it took so long to comment, by the way. I've been out-of-town over Easter break. I'm back now, so write more soon.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 22 April 2006 17:40
next please!
AQUARIANGIRL
Thursday, 04 May 2006 12:58
Please, more....loving it. You write with such depth and the world you have created has sucked me in and left me wanting more.....especially Jaylee! and the crews incredulous reactions to the Jaylee, trying to work out whether they are still playing!!!
DRAKB
Thursday, 11 May 2006 23:48
Come on. I been waitin and waitin. More Kaylee & Christmas fluff please. Pretty please...
BELLONA
Sunday, 28 May 2006 14:35
please? *puppy eyes*

b
WINTERHART
Thursday, 01 June 2006 15:15
*adds to the begging for more* :(
WITTLEPANTHER
Sunday, 08 October 2006 19:30
Desperately waiting for more! *beg*
XOXBREYOXO
Monday, 29 October 2007 11:50
Throwing in my plea for more! *does puppy dog eyes, sets chin a-quiverin'*
BARDOFSHADOW
Friday, 16 December 2011 19:58
Sad to see this has been abandoned,I was really looking forward to the next installment. :(

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