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The Way of Jayne, Part 2

Monday, December 5, 2005

More on Jayne as a young teenager and the older woman who makes him a man. No man-making yet, though. This is still lead-up. Gimme your thoughts, neh? I thankee.

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The Way of Jayne, Part 2

The Cobb triplets, all three, were sick. It’d been six months since the town midwife had helped Ma Cobb birth the babies and Jayne had assisted in their first spongebath. Timmie, Jayne’s slightly younger twin sister, had been mother to the babes more than Ma since they were born allowing to the weird being on Ma in a small way most of the time since the birth, and in a big way other times.

Timmie didn’t mind mothering. She’d been like a co-mother to Mattie who’d come several years after she and Jayne drew breath and she’d always loved doing for little ‘uns. If she kept her good school grades up, kept learning at a prodigious rate, she thought she might like to turn her natural love for kids into a teaching job some day.

Jayne helped out when she asked him to, indeed, she didn’t have to ask him most of the time. He came off all brash bluster in this boy-to-man stage but he had a heart sensitive enough to just naturally know when the big sister of the family had had enough and needed him to shoulder the load.

But when something came up that the thirteen year old siblings couldn’t handle, like what was ailing the babies right now, they didn’t know where to turn. Pa was mostly indisposed, on the juice, and Ma, well, Ma was a butterfly. She sat half in a rocking chair mentally flapping iridescent wings, smiling and at peace with the world without being in it for about the past three hours. She’d eat when she needed to if given food, would go to the bathroom alright, but wasn’t much of a mother to anybody but her own self.

All hell was breaking loose in the kids’ room but she couldn’t care, serene in her rocking perch. In the room barely 10 feet from her three small voices screeched fit to pierce each other’s eardrums, each baby feeding off the next one’s cries. Thank the god of aural tranquility, they seldom even let forth a cry of anger or upset as long as they were fed and dry, normally. They were good babies, and almost no trouble. Except for now when they

Comments
Monday, 05 December 2005 12:54
Hey, I'm really enjoying this look into Jayne's childhood. Can't wait to read the next installment.
Monday, 05 December 2005 20:59
This is totally belivable. I like seeing Jayne as a young man. I think it's very true to character that he thinks of the kids as his (all 6 of them). I see Jayne as very responsible for what he considers his.
You've also got a very realxed, down home kind of feel to this that works very well.


Can't wait to read the next installment.
Tuesday, 06 December 2005 04:11
I can absolutely see this as Jayne's history. He's got a sensitive soul under that hard merc shell, be interesting to see when he started hiding it. Because of what happens with Maeve, or because he has to be the responsible one. Or both?
Can't hardly wait for more ;P
Thursday, 08 December 2005 02:19
Great as usual! I think you've really got a grasp of Jayne as a young man. I can't wait for the next installment!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 19 December 2005 01:16
You've really got a great way of telling a story. And I got a kick out of the name choices. Peter, Paul and Mary!!! You've done a great job of setting up the story...off to read part 3.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 04 January 2006 05:33
If Mauve and Jayne start makking I ain't readin' another word.

Har just kidding, know that wont happen -- BUT great story! Heck. I give this chapter a 7, though I gave last one 8. This one wasn't quite as stimulating.

But I ain't done readin' your story yet. No sir.
Tuesday, 24 January 2006 16:47
‘What shall we do with the handsome farmboy’
i have a few ideas *wink*

b
Friday, 28 April 2006 00:41
Well written again, and I absolutely love Maeve, for several reasons (one being the angel weed, obviously) :)
Thursday, 25 May 2006 22:26
Jayne playin the papa to his younger sibs...and assitant to his twin sis, this is fab, and I'm lovin'it muchly.

His concern for their sickness, and his concern for it spreading...


I loved Maeve and Mattie's return

She hurried out to the porch to wait for Maeve and Mattie to get there. Jayne followed. “Isn’t that supposed to be ‘sailor,’ Maeve?” “Sure is, Timmie, but when I spied Mr. Cobb passed out in the hayrack, I changed the lyrics a tad in his honor.” *I see this so perfect, Maeve strolling along with Mattie, seeing a drunk in a haystack, then belting out the song..loved it!*

This is so much better than work!

Part 3......
Monday, 07 August 2006 17:52
Very believable that with a family like you're portraying here that Jayne would be the protector. Nice slow build on what a young Jayne's family life would be like.

I was wondering when you'd have Jayne exhibit some 'reaction' to the closeness of the woman. It was definitely inevitable. Came just at the right time, I think.

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