The Pleasuring of Kaylee, Part 3
Malcolm Reynolds met Kaylee while she was walking head down and concentrating in the corridor outside Jayne’s quarters. She looked to be dirt-smeared but cute in a spring-born lamb kind of way. “Hey, Kaylee. What’s news?”
His mechanic stopped short and squeaked in surprise, putting out one hand against the hallway wall, “Uh, hi, Cap’n. Didn’t see you, I musta been wool-gathering.” She shifted from one foot to the other, placing hands on hips. “Ummm, how’s Jayne doing?”
“Good, real good. Doc’s been to see him so I know the verdict ain’t just wishful thinking. According to Simon and Jayne, it seems your good works’ve been part of the cure. Benefits of that’ll be paying off in credits if my plans for ill-gotten gains go shiny. Jayne’s gun-hand representing our little group looks to be a key element so his bein’ healthy’ll be the difference between paid and broke.”
He smiled at her absent-mindedly, thoughts locked on the further workings of The Plan.
“Inara told me you took him something to eat this morning. Did he get it down alright,?” she asked, making conversation but also wanting to find out if Jayne still needed her to bring him something to break his fast.
Trucking a meal down to him yesterday had been a means to communion between them. Might work that way again. Doing for him today might be a good way to get said what needed saying.
There was talking to be done. Inara had been right to suggest it. A quick ripping of the bandage and then she (and he) could go on from there. Which ever way the wind blew them.
No matter what happened, Jayne’s little lover was tired of the waiting, the wondering and the wounding it brought to her mind.
“Ate four strawberry baos, some powdered eggs Book liquefied and scrambled up for him and downed two cans of milk,” Mal answered, one side of his mouth smiling at her as he spoke. “I’d say he did alright, inhaled it all as if it was air and he was suffocating from the lack.”
No meal-taking
ok off to actually read it now.
Kristy
I can't wait for the angst of words to come between them. It's bound to happen, but yay for the smut!
I love it when you tell me what you want in a story. Keeps me going in a direction that makes the fic flow better. I'm listening, for sure.
You've got Jayne's... in Kaylee's... and you ...you can't just leave us here.
We need more! Jayne needs more! You're being cruel. Almost as cruel as Niska!
Oh, okay, maybe not THAT cruel!
I loved Jayne's reaction to turning around and finding Kaylee. Lovely! Very lovely indeed!
*thumps head on keyboard in frustration*
You stopped there???? I'm holding my breath until the next chapter is up, so if I turn blue and then die, it's your fault ;)
Keep it up! I can't wait for the next part! (Two parts tonight was a treat too, by the way ^_^)
And as a writer, starting a relationship off that way for your characters can be tricky.
But I like how you have them slowly piece a relationship together.
The whole drying Jayne off was sensuous but still cute and in character for Kaylee, especially the nonchalant happy way she goes about it like saying, "raise your right wing".
I could totally have seen the Kaylee fry character doing something like this, smiling all the way! And it was a great "bonding" technique to have applied to her and Jayne!
Fave lines:
>>>Trucking a meal down to him yesterday had been a means to communion between them.>>>
You make it seem to easy!
>>>And his cock nearly hit her in the head.>>>
You might be amused why I like this one but because you had it stand as one sentence by itself and so blunt at that makes the action going on seem all the more "funny", in essence, or really, all the more "confusion" spilling forth.
>>>Well, somebody throw him a squirrel and let him ride a cab to nut town. He was about to go completely insane and it looked to be a very good place to be.>>>
The voice tense in this sentence might be out of place, but the wording itself is shiny! Great and unique description to describe how "befuddled" he's feeling.
Great way to end the story too:
>>>and filled her mouth with Jayne.>>>
AHHHHHH!!!! Now on to the next one!!!
Namaste,
SAHS
KIM
Glad that, after consideration, you liked what she did. Confession: Typing that last bit left me all-kindsa moistened. When I typed the last character in that line I knew it had to stay--no changes. Thanks again! Who are you?
Jayne jumped, hands reaching for weapons that weren’t on his wet naked hip. *Saw it and laughed my ruttin' off. Jayne at his most "vulnerable" bein all nekkid and such. At least he still had his gun.
He was red hot though, not a shiver to spare. *not a shiver to spare, awesome!
Well, somebody throw him a squirrel and let him ride a cab to nut town. *see, this is so you, and takin' something like a squirrel and making it work perfectly right here, is why I love your work so much.
Inara was wrong. Words weren’t what was needed here. *and I have n.......
*pulls self off floor, and back to computer, on to part 4.
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