Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Valentine's Day

Saturday, February 12, 2005

Kaylee and Simon have their first lover's spat. NC-17

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4421    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: I do not own any of the Firefly characters or am in any way connected to the show.

Characters: Kaylee, Simon

Summary: Kaylee and Simon have their first lover’s spat. NC-17

Authors Notes: I’d like to thank Oldfan45 for giving me the idea to write a fic about Kaylee and Simon’s first blow up. I’d also like to thank Ragdoll and Mar for giving me some ideas as to what the fight should be about. Also, towards the end this gets a bit smutty. I haven’t written smut before, so if it sucks, hopefully I’ll do better next time. Feedback is always appreciated. If you have anymore ideas for K/S stories you’d like me to give a try at writing let me know.

Valentine’s Day

By KaySky

She knows she comes second. She knows she will always come second. Even though she knows this, she is hoping today will be different. She is hoping today will be the one day, out of the three hundred and sixty-five a year, that she will come first. She’s nervous. She has made plans for today. She has made plans for tonight. She wants everything to be perfect.

She wakes up early and makes coffee. She takes it to his room. She thinks he looks adorable while he’s sleeping. She stands there looking at him for a few minutes, enjoying the moment, until the moment comes to a screaming end.

He jumps out of bed, bumps into her, coffee spills on her hand. He doesn’t notice. He has already made it to his sister’s room. A sigh of disappointment escapes her lips. So the morning wouldn’t be perfect. She will still make the rest of the day perfect. Her eyes start to water. Not because she is saddened by the events of this morning, but because her hand is throbbing in pain. The coffee was really hot.

She walks to River’s room. He is holding his sister, comforting her. He strokes her hair as he tells her everything is going to be okay. He doesn’t notice her. She wants to walk on by, but the burning sensation in her hand won’t let her.

“Simon…” She says his name softly. She doesn’t want to interrupt, but she need

Comments
RAGDOLL
Saturday, 12 February 2005 09:08
It was cute...and I liked the spat...but I didn't read the smut...smut scares me.
Saturday, 12 February 2005 11:51
I liked the way River confesses to Kaylee that she deliberately kept Simon from her out of fear of being left alone. That is so in keeping with something she would do and Kaylee being so forgiving of Simon is right on the button. Thank goodness there were still two hours left of Valentine's Day! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 12 February 2005 18:09
That was fucking awesome. Erotic lit is so much better when it's better developed and you have an emotional attachment to the characters. And the way you do it was perfect. Keep it up, you're doing great. Maybe you can make this a series. I'd like to see what happened to Wash/Zoe and Mal/Inara on that day. Multiple narratives are cool.

You did good.
MAR
Sunday, 13 February 2005 04:37
^_^You welcome, happyy you liked the idea.

I liked it very much, I was feeling very sorry for Kaylee, then I felt sorry for Simon and finally for River. I liked the way you made her look all sad and sorry.
Sunday, 13 February 2005 17:11
Pretty damn shexney!! (shiny and sexy)

Keep up the awsome work!
Sunday, 13 February 2005 18:06
Gee >blushes, scrapes boot toe in dust< I said somethin' that made you do this good thing? Gosh >further blushing<

>>>She knows she comes second. She knows she will always come second. Even though she knows this, she is hoping today will be different.<<<

According to both my ex-wives this is the lot of Woman in love with male being of any species. I think it's a super shiny way to say it.

And ReginaRoadie has an excellent point, your erotically charged bit is far mor fun since we're already invested in this couple's ahppiness. I also like the idea of a Valentine's Day series featuring each pairing, plus the single men's thoughts on the day. ***NOTE that I do not advocate any Book/Jayne slash, the idea creeps me out.***

What would River make of all this...erm, activity? Genius she is, but emotionally she's still a child far younger than her teen years one minute, a wise old crone the next. Remember how she responded to Wash and Zoe's necking session in OiS?
Sunday, 13 February 2005 19:12
All right, I've been persuaded. Once I finish my first chapter of my latest story, I will write V-day stories for the rest of the crew.
Don't worry about any Book/Jayne slash coming from me. I don't want any mental images of that. Ick!
Monday, 14 February 2005 06:51
Hmm. . . Book/Jayne slash, now that's an underrepresented market and could explain why Book never married.

But on a more serious note, this was beautiful. As my V-Day series might hint I'm not a big fan of a holiday that celebrates some poor bastard getting his head cut off by giving chocolate. That having been this almost made me a fan. It was beautifully written and very tender, even the smutty parts. Kaylee having the triple orgasim, who knew Simon had it in him. Maybe we should start referring to him as Dr. Love.
Monday, 14 February 2005 17:33
Go Dr. Love!

Really good story, KaySky! I agree with the common consensus that there needs to be a story for every couple.

- Soul
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 16 February 2005 01:11
Actually for my suggestion, I was thinking that if Jayne were to have anyone on V-Day, it would be with his right hand.

Not sure about River and Book. Maybe they'd share the evening together, but not in a sexual way at all. Maybe while the resident couples are going at it, and Jayne's in his bunk, Book and River would have a discussion about various kinds of love. Eros, philia, agape, that sort of thing.
Wednesday, 16 February 2005 01:14
I'm the anonymous guy that posted above.
Wednesday, 16 February 2005 05:26
That's funny. The only person I could picture Jayne spending Valentine's Day with was his hand, too...lol

I'd also like to add to my "Ick" list. So far it's just Jayne/Book, but after reading the above comment, I have to agree and Book/River has been added to that list.

You'll find no grandpa sex writing from me!
Wednesday, 10 August 2005 19:23
YOW!!! words fail... can i spend next valentine's on serenity?
Friday, 04 November 2005 22:00
Finally gotten around to read this! I *love*!!!

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