Disclaimer: I do not own any of the Firefly characters or am in any way connected to the show.
Characters: Kaylee, Simon
Summary: Kaylee and Simon have their first lover’s spat. NC-17
Authors Notes: I’d like to thank Oldfan45 for giving me the idea to write a fic about Kaylee and Simon’s first blow up. I’d also like to thank Ragdoll and Mar for giving me some ideas as to what the fight should be about. Also, towards the end this gets a bit smutty. I haven’t written smut before, so if it sucks, hopefully I’ll do better next time. Feedback is always appreciated. If you have anymore ideas for K/S stories you’d like me to give a try at writing let me know.
Valentine’s Day
By KaySky
She knows she comes second. She knows she will always come second. Even though she knows this, she is hoping today will be different. She is hoping today will be the one day, out of the three hundred and sixty-five a year, that she will come first. She’s nervous. She has made plans for today. She has made plans for tonight. She wants everything to be perfect.
She wakes up early and makes coffee. She takes it to his room. She thinks he looks adorable while he’s sleeping. She stands there looking at him for a few minutes, enjoying the moment, until the moment comes to a screaming end.
He jumps out of bed, bumps into her, coffee spills on her hand. He doesn’t notice. He has already made it to his sister’s room. A sigh of disappointment escapes her lips. So the morning wouldn’t be perfect. She will still make the rest of the day perfect. Her eyes start to water. Not because she is saddened by the events of this morning, but because her hand is throbbing in pain. The coffee was really hot.
She walks to River’s room. He is holding his sister, comforting her. He strokes her hair as he tells her everything is going to be okay. He doesn’t notice her. She wants to walk on by, but the burning sensation in her hand won’t let her.
“Simon…” She says his name softly. She doesn’t want to interrupt, but she need
You can't take the sky from me
You did good.
I liked it very much, I was feeling very sorry for Kaylee, then I felt sorry for Simon and finally for River. I liked the way you made her look all sad and sorry.
Keep up the awsome work!
>>>She knows she comes second. She knows she will always come second. Even though she knows this, she is hoping today will be different.<<<
According to both my ex-wives this is the lot of Woman in love with male being of any species. I think it's a super shiny way to say it.
And ReginaRoadie has an excellent point, your erotically charged bit is far mor fun since we're already invested in this couple's ahppiness. I also like the idea of a Valentine's Day series featuring each pairing, plus the single men's thoughts on the day. ***NOTE that I do not advocate any Book/Jayne slash, the idea creeps me out.***
What would River make of all this...erm, activity? Genius she is, but emotionally she's still a child far younger than her teen years one minute, a wise old crone the next. Remember how she responded to Wash and Zoe's necking session in OiS?
Don't worry about any Book/Jayne slash coming from me. I don't want any mental images of that. Ick!
But on a more serious note, this was beautiful. As my V-Day series might hint I'm not a big fan of a holiday that celebrates some poor bastard getting his head cut off by giving chocolate. That having been this almost made me a fan. It was beautifully written and very tender, even the smutty parts. Kaylee having the triple orgasim, who knew Simon had it in him. Maybe we should start referring to him as Dr. Love.
Really good story, KaySky! I agree with the common consensus that there needs to be a story for every couple.
- Soul
Not sure about River and Book. Maybe they'd share the evening together, but not in a sexual way at all. Maybe while the resident couples are going at it, and Jayne's in his bunk, Book and River would have a discussion about various kinds of love. Eros, philia, agape, that sort of thing.
I'd also like to add to my "Ick" list. So far it's just Jayne/Book, but after reading the above comment, I have to agree and Book/River has been added to that list.
You'll find no grandpa sex writing from me!
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