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The Unexpected: Part Two

Wednesday, April 6, 2005

Mal makes a hard decision. Kaylee gives him another factor to consider.

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Disclaimer: Go ahead sue me. I'm a college student. If you think I have any money, you clearly never went to college. I don't own these characters, I just find it fun to use them.

Authors Notes: I would like to send another shout out to Reginaroadie. As always, he has been a great wall to bounce ideas off of. He was also the voice behind Travis Walken in this piece. So I'd just like to say thanks. =o)

The Unexpected

By KaySky

Part Two

“Cap’n…” Any other time Kaylee would have been delighted to see her captain. She’d been so hopeful those footsteps belonged to Simon and River. Now she was devastated. Simon and River were really gone. She tried telling Mal, but her emotions got the best of her. The only thing she could do was run into his arms and sob.

“Guess this means the doc got snatched.” Jayne said ever so insensitively.

Mal turned his head slightly. His eyes fell upon Wash. Had he not been holding Kaylee, he would have begun beating his pilot into a bloody pulp.

Zoe saw the look in Mal’s eyes. It was rage, undeniable, justifiable rage. She was angry, too. At the moment she couldn’t think of a single time she was ever angrier at her husband. He fucked up. That’s all there was to it. She took him by the arm and led him up the stairs. He needed to sleep now. In the morning when he wakes up, he will be dealt with. An apology wasn’t going to cut it. Wash really fucked up.

* * * *

Simon awoke to find himself lying in an empty, cold, concrete room. His head was trembling with pain. As he rubbed his hand across the massive welt on the back of his head, he remembered. He quickly jumped to his feet, yelling out his sister’s name.

The door to his cell slowly opened. An Alliance official carrying a briefcase stepped into the room. His footsteps sounded like hammers pounding against the cold concrete. Simon immediately yelled, “Where is my sister?”

“She’s being tended to, Mr. Tam. But that is of little importance. What is of major importance is what you’ve done.” Tra

Comments
Wednesday, 06 April 2005 17:42
Ooh, more KaySky goodness! I don't know where these ideas of yours keep coming from, but each one is better than the one before it, and the first one was really ruttin' good! More!

- Soul
Wednesday, 06 April 2005 18:19
I've told you this before, but I'll say it again. This is really good. The addition of Kiara brings in another interesting element.
Wednesday, 06 April 2005 19:02
Excellent! Though it felt wrong that the Captain would turn his back on Simon and River (more so with Kaylee being married to Simon) it was a relief when on hearing about the pregnancy how everything slotted back into the correct alignment. Can't wait to see what happens next. Those gorram kidnappers had better watch out! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 07 April 2005 03:55
As for me being the voice of Travis Walken, it's just me regurgitating my sociology class if Christopher Walken from TRUE ROMANCE was my prof.
Thursday, 07 April 2005 08:54
good to see mal made the right decision in the end. for a second there i was afraid he was gonna leave them behind. no, just kidding, i knew he could never do that.
good chapter, i loved the kaylee/mal interaction.

no power in the verse
xoxox-fredikayllow-xoxox
Sunday, 24 April 2005 15:45
Sweet, painful. Scary interrogation. And convincing. Poor Mal. Poor Kaylee. Poor Simon.
BELLONA
Saturday, 17 September 2005 18:25
YEAH!!! COME ON!!! *punches air and leaps out of seat* i just KNEW mal wouldn't leave simon an' river t'the Alliance!

b

remember, super-genius, socially inept, eternally happy babies...*nods knowingly*
Saturday, 05 November 2005 05:47
Oh, I can't wait to read on, I love the way Kaylee told Mal about the baby, very well done :)
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 02 March 2006 07:35
Blackbeanie- Awesome.
I like Mal being all noble

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