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The Unexpected: Part One

Thursday, March 31, 2005

In more ways than one, Wash is going to wake up the next morning feeling pretty gorram bad.

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Disclaimer: It’s Joss’s creation, but I love playing with it.

Authors Notes: This is the begining of my latest little creation. It follows suit with my previous stories. Feedback is appreciated!

The Unexpected

By KaySky

Part One

It had been a long day for Kaylee Tam. As she slid open the door to her bunk and flipped on the light, she was more than ready to just flump onto her bed. She had spent all day trying to work out the kinks in the cooling drive. After ten long hours of work she finally got it functioning again.

She slid off her coveralls and the cool air that met her skin sent goosebumps running all along her body. She finished undressing and began to wash herself making sure all the engine grease was washed away. The feeling of her soft cotton pajama bottoms against her skin warmed her inside. She pulled on a light pink tank top and pulled her hair back into a ponytail. She was now completely ready to meet her bed.

*Knock*

She sighed before forcing a cheery, “Come in.”

River walked into the room and over to Kaylee, poking her in the arm. “It.” She smiled.

“River, I’m so tired. How ‘bout I be ‘it’ tomorrow?” Kaylee’s warm smile overcame the exhaustion in her eyes.

“Not a game.” River giggled. “You have it.”

Kaylee was much too exhausted to ponder River’s rambles. She needed her to get to the point. “I have what?”

“Simon’s the doctor.” River smiled as she rolled her eyes.

“River I’m not sick.” Kaylee argued.

“Not sick, you have it.”

Kaylee was too exhausted to argue any longer and River had too much energy to give up anytime soon. “So I should see Simon about having ‘it’?”

“He is the doctor.” River pulled Kaylee by the arms leading her out of the room and on her way to the infirmary.

* * * *

Simon had been in the infirmary for hours going over his notes. He was sure there had to be something he was missing. River had been doing so well up until this morning. She hadn’t had any fits or nightmares. She’d even started talking normal

Comments
Thursday, 31 March 2005 00:49
More please. The new scens you added worked very well. I am definitly on the edge of my seat now. Keep it up.
Thursday, 31 March 2005 01:08
Eeeeks, I can't imagine even a drunk Wash letting strangers know about Simon and River being fugitives with a price on their heads! Ouch, lots of angst and not so happy recovering from drink for Wash. That's if Zoe don't kill him first. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
MAI
Thursday, 31 March 2005 07:22
Uh-Oh. I love the bit between Kaylee and River. I'm not so sure about Wash or any of the crew giving up info. It seems a little too easy.
Still, let the angst ensue! Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
Friday, 01 April 2005 09:39
of course you left it at a cliffhanger.
i was so happy when i read "Kaylee Tam". wow. she's all married and pregnant. amazing.
anyway, once again, a great chapter.

no power in the verse
xoxox-fredikayllow-xoxox
Monday, 04 April 2005 19:36
Woohoo, more Kaysky!! Okay, so Wash got drunk and told about Simon and River. I'm seeing a not-too-happy life for him when he sobers up. More!

- Soul
Sunday, 24 April 2005 11:07
I don't get nearly enough time to read other people's stories and having just read this, I realize what a damn shame that is.

This was lovely. Such a sweet, new relationship between Simon and Kaylee. A really nice, light chapter but undercut with coming darkness.

I just hope Zoe's not going to skin Wash!
BELLONA
Saturday, 17 September 2005 18:03
WASH!!! that man is a ruttin' liability...a funny liability, but a liability all the same...

b
Saturday, 05 November 2005 05:37
Ooo I love, I got the whole "it" bit at once :) Very nice, can't wit to read the rest :)
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 02 March 2006 07:16
Not sure why I havn't reviewed this part yet, it's great.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 02 March 2006 07:17
Blackbeanie- sorry that was me, I thought I was logged in.

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