Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

The Unexpected: Part Three

Wednesday, April 13, 2005

In this lovely chapter Simon and Kaylee both have sweet, flashback dreams. Book and Wash have a conversation, and Walken assigns Kiara a task. Oh, and Simon thinks of a plan.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3838    RATING: 10.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: I don't own the Firefly characters. They haven't come up for auction on ebay yet.

Authors Notes: Once again I'd like to thank Reginaroadie for his help with Simon's dialogue in the first flashback scene. And of course, for being my wall. =o)

The Unexpected

By KaySky

Part Three

“Am I sick?” She was a bit apprehensive about finding out the answer. Her nervous fingers began playing with a loose string on her pajama pants.

Sitting next to her on the examining table, he took her hands in his, attempting to calm her nerves. "No, no you're not sick." He looked deeply into her eyes as he told her the diagnosis. "You're pregnant.”

"Pregnant? I think I need to sit down.” Kaylee Tam was in such shock she didn’t realize she was already sitting down.

"I thought you were taking those contraception injections from Inara?" He, too, had been just as stunned when he read the test results. He was still slightly shocked.

“I was. I do. Every morning as soon as I wake up, I do. How could this happen?” She looked into his eyes seeking answers.

"I don't know. I can't think of a..." He suddenly realized it.

“Simon? You can't think of a...?” She desperately urged him to continue his thought.

"I just did—the linen closet. We were woken up in the middle of the night by the gunshot. We’d both been overly concerned with the situation. I’d forgotten all about River’s medication. I suspect you didn’t remember your injections either."

“Oh.” She thought back to that night. She had been so frazzled. She was distracted and she simply forgot. Several minutes passed in silence. “I'm going to be a mom. That means your going to be a dad. We are going to be a mom and dad.” She said the words out loud as if she was trying to convince herself they were true.

“Yeah.” Simon was still trying to regain his composure. This was so unexpected.

The news finally settled in. Kaylee turned towards Simon and excitedly said, “I’m going to be a mom. You're going to be a dad.” She w

Comments
Wednesday, 13 April 2005 04:28
You know I like this. I particularily like the flashback structure you have. I hope you further develop it.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 13 April 2005 05:31
love the idea of contacting Inara. Hope it doesnt get them all into trouble thou...
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 13 April 2005 17:44
Excellent story, moving along nicely.
Wednesday, 13 April 2005 17:56
Oh good gorram, now Simon's gone and trusted his goaler! While Kiara may sympathise with Simon I don't trust her to be strong enough to defy Walken. Just hope our Big Damn Heroes get to him before anything truly awful happens. Come on Wash, time to be Hero! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 14 April 2005 06:53
i love this story, as you already know. but why oh why are these posts so far apart!! i need my KaySky fix you know!!
but it's really good anyway.

no power in the verse
xoxox-fredikayllow-xoxox
Thursday, 14 April 2005 17:20
Come on Wash! It's time to make up for what you did. Lead Serenity to the rescue!!

- Soul
Monday, 25 April 2005 18:39
Darn good! The dream sequences were a fantastic device - recapping past events and conveying current emotion at the same time. Very skilfully employed.

My heart ached for Simon and Kaylee.

So Jayne and his lack of pants provided a very welcome bit of comic relief. Nice job.
BELLONA
Saturday, 17 September 2005 18:38
“Just promise me it won’t be the mercenary delivering my baby.”

movin' swiftly on from the highly disturbin' thought...very, very good!

b
Saturday, 05 November 2005 06:00
Those dream sequences were... dreamy, can't find another word, can't wait to read more.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 02 March 2006 07:38
Blackbeanie- Now I see why Simon is top three percent.

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