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Past, Present, & Future: Part 9

Tuesday, March 15, 2005

The preperation for Simon and Kaylee's wedding takes place and the chapter ends with the moment you've all been waiting for, the wedding itself.

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Disclaimer: I no way, shape, or form am I connected to Joss's lovely creation.

Authors Notes: Once again I have to give a shout out to Reginaroadie. After struggling for hours trying to come up with Simon's vows, he put me out of my misery and wrote the most incredibly romantic thing I've ever read in my life. So remember when you're reaching for the box of tissues that it was his romantic genius that came up with that, not mine. Thanks Reginaroadie!

Past, Present, & Future

By KaySky

Part Nine

The day before the wedding was chaos. Danielle had transformed into a sergeant, barking orders at her regime.

“Jayne, I know you’ve been shot and all, but that was days ago.” Danielle said very calmly. “I NEED YOU TO FOCUS!” She said not so calmly. “I could have hired a chimp to set up the chairs, but I thought you could handle it.” She pulled the chair out of Jayne’s hands. “Clearly I was wrong.”

“Everybody always yells at me.” Jayne grumbled.

“That’s because you usually deserve a good yellin’ at.” Mal had walked up behind Jayne. “I think the bride-to-be needs to see you.” He told Danielle.

“Mal, do you think you can manage the task of setting up chairs in an actual line instead of scattering them about wherever you please?” Danielle smiled at Mal, but her eyes focused on Jayne. “Obviously, the task calls for someone of great intelligence.”

“My, my, Danielle Blake, I never pegged you for quite the…”

Jayne wanted nothing more than to finish Mal’s sentence. Danielle didn’t let him. “Jayne Cobb if you want to live to see the sunset you better keep that trap of yours shut.”

“I’ll handle things.” Mal assured her. “Go see to Kaylee.”

Danielle stormed off towards the Frye house, making sure to bump hard into Jayne as she passed by him.

* * * *

Simon was sitting in the small office of the Frye home thinking of his vows. He tore another piece of paper out of his notebook, crumpled it up, and tossed it in the trashcan.

“Feelings don’t come from the mind.” River

Comments
Tuesday, 15 March 2005 04:40
I know you've heard this from me a dozen times, but that was so gorram beautiful. The vow I wrote is just a small piece in a bigger puzzle that you've assembled so beautifully. I should be thanking you, really. So thank you.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 15 March 2005 12:08
my mum is looking at me all weirdly coz i can't stop smiling like an idiot. i just love the thought of kaylee and simon (my favourite couple) getting married. it was just so romantic. very well described. it was beautiful, lovely, amazing and... i can't come up with any more synonymns.
it was great.you have to keep writing past the next chapter. i need my kaylee/simon fix. now all you have to do is get mal and inara together....

no power in the verse
xoxox-fredikayllow-xoxox
Tuesday, 15 March 2005 17:39
Absolutely brilliant! So gorram shiny I can hardly see to type. Well done, how in the good gorram are you gonna top that? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 15 March 2005 22:10
How am I going to top that? I don't think the hamster has fallen off the wheel quite yet. Surely, he's got enough energy to push out a few more good ideas. If not, I'll be in the market for a new hamster. Any hamster breeders here?

But seriously, I appreciate all the feedback from everyone. It's nice to know what you all think. =o)
Thursday, 17 March 2005 16:06
This was so wonderful! All the events leading up to the wedding, and the wedding itself was done just so beautifully. I have to second the notion that there better be more coming from you after the next chapter! :-P

- Soul
BELLONA
Saturday, 17 September 2005 17:48
y'know, before i read this, i was considerin' breakin' up with my boy, but now, not so much...you got a gift KaySky, don't stop writin'

b
Sunday, 29 January 2006 01:49
You're right, Reginaroadie is a genious. Simon's vows were amazing. So very much like him and just simply perfect.

Excellent story. I can't believe I've never read any of these. I'm going through all of them today!
Friday, 21 October 2011 01:55
oh my gorram... That was... BEAUTIFUL! :'D

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