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Polished Memories 2.0 - The Mission

Sunday, November 20, 2011

Howdy Coats!! Been a while since I’ve been able to jot something down, but here goes. …Continuation of the “ Polished Memories” series, and more of what Mal remembers about the battle of Serenity Valley. We can see that the pain, and suffering, and casualties of war are chipping away at the Captain’s beliefs. Is Mal losing his soul? Only the Shepherd would know the soldier at this point, and maybe his Corporal, Zoe. Read on for clarification….

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Polished Memories 2.0

******************** The Mission *********************

A question: There’s a thing, a machine, an actual piece of working equipment, how often can it break down and how many parts can go un-repaired before it stops working? Now there’s a human, a person…..how much of their soul can be lost before they forfeit any peace that can be found by them in heaven?

Shepherd’s Chronicles : 2519

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People & Places:

Tantalean Gully

Breakpoint Pass

Lieutenant Ben Baker

Corporal Alleyne (Zoe)

Private Bendis

Code words & phrases:

“Screamers” or, “Hamsters Balls” as they are sometimes referred to --- are inflatable rubber spheres the size of beach balls, with a small motor unit inside that moves them around. There is a heat transmitter inside that simulates body heat, and the reasons they are know as Screamers or Hamster Balls are for the facts that they attract the attention of the heat seeking satellites in atmo the Alliance uses over certain battlefields. Also, their movement mimics the movement of a hamster moving around a room inside a clear plastic globe, so the term “Hamster Balls” was coined by a browncoat soldier. These are used to trick and confuse the enemy. Much like the dummy parachutists dropped over the French countryside during the ETW- WW2 era.

Quail Party --- Diversionary maneuver, used to focus the enemies attention in the wrong direction.

AIR-15 --- described below…

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Malcolm Reynolds looked out into the evening of a beautiful Hera sky. Even with all it’s pain and misery, this valley could be a majestic wonder once the noise stopped. It was silent now, but the browncoat line was expecting a counter attack at any moment, a revenge attack, a response to the Brownghost attack in Batean Gorge. The browncoat line was thin, but they were expected to hold. They waited, a bit on edge, but certainly

Comments
Monday, 21 November 2011 15:27
Nice bit of pre-series history, BPZ. I imagine there are a lot of stories one could tell, to fill out what happened in Serenity Valley.

I liked how you told about pre-battle jitters, that Mal wasn't free of them, but a regular human like everybody else: "Mal had his own way with dealing with this. He concentrated on his leadership skills. This took his mind off of his nervous jitters. He tried to make sure every one of his troops were ready and equipped. He’d also made sure that the field medics were in position to attend the wounded." I can see him dealing with his nerves in exactly that way.

Loved this line: "Screams weren’t colored brown or purple"--so true.

Liked this bit of battlefield humor: "If there hadn’t been a war ongoing, Mal and Joss woulda thought that they had started one."

Also, your story answers that question of, just why did Mal have that nerve cluster moved? Thanks for writing.
Monday, 21 November 2011 15:35
Forgot to say, I also liked the little detail you put in about how the medical personnel for the Browncoats included veterinarians...basically anyone with medical knowledge of any kind was better than nothing. I bet some of those veterinarians made pretty good field medics! But it's a telling little detail, just shows what a different place the Core world and Rim world folks are coming from.
Monday, 21 November 2011 18:11
Oh, I loved the veterinarian thing. Very western! In fact, it reminds me of 3:10 to Yuma, in which Alan Tudyk plays a veterinarian turned doctor with his classic sense of humor. But I think Alan may need to start renegotiating the terms of his contracts.
Tuesday, 22 November 2011 00:21
Howdy ebfiddler!

Great to have your input on the story. You are totally right, there are many, many untold stories left to tell from the Joss verse. I’ll bet that Jayne Cobb could have 106 all on his own!

Yepper, brought in a whole bunch of familiar faces from the FF series. Bendis, Zoe, Lieutenant Baker, and introduced a couple new ones like, Josilene Radcliff & Doctor Marshal Delano Holcomb. The bit where Doc Holcomb removes his surgical gloves….I mean his BLUE surgical gloves may mean something, or maybe not. Might be an avenue worth exploring.

Also, doesn’t it seem ironic that an Alliance medical doctor was responsible for moving the nerve cluster that changed the history of the verse? Even helped it along?

Anyhoo, thanks for the posts and telling me what you liked with the fic. Brightened my day you did. Sorry for all the mistakes. Finished the last two pages rather quickly, just to get it up and posted….

See ya….we hold…BPZ
Tuesday, 22 November 2011 00:21
Hiya Bytemite!

Glad that you enjoyed the veterinarian link to the browncoats medical team. I didn’t want the story to come across as the Freedom-Fighters having the worse conditions for fighting “ In this whole crap hill verse.”,

I’m sure things were very unpleasant on the other side as well……….and me implying that every Browncoat medic was a horse doctor , well I know the fic readers on the site here knew that not EVERY independent doc was an animal doctor. Even if they were, didn’t mean they weren’t good at their duty.

“ ….it reminds me of 3:10 to Yuma,”

Yepper, saw it, and enjoyed seeing Alan in it! You are so very right, Alan does need to up his cut of the take. Not only the characters that they played on Firefly, but the actual actors themselves are some of the “most down to earth” folk I’ve seen in the entertainment industry. Their human appeal to the masses is very high.

See ya, fellow browncoat …..BPZ

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