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Levels of Heaven: Depths of Hell part3

Wednesday, December 21, 2011

Chapter 3 up and running. Some questions answered, and a few more created. Some characters folks may like, some not so much. But Isn’t that the way things really are? Jayne has always wanted to be the commander of his own ship. Mal, unknowingly lets him play for a while……Ok, also, a villain arrives on the scene….boo-hisss, the crowd makes wicked catcalls….BPZ

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Levels of Heaven: Depths of Hell

Part - 3

Names, places & points of interest;

Graham Dehn

Carson Maxwell

Clive Hinds

Gladys City

Minear 2

Century Mining Hotel

Allmine Minerals Exploration Division

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Graham Dehn strolled down the cargo ramp and viewed the small town through the dust of a sweltering mid-morning haze. He had already booked lodging at the “Century Mining Hotel” in Gladys City on the little moon of Minear 2.

“Careful with that luggage, porter,” he spoke as a crewmember of the Carpathia began to load his baggage onto a cart to be ferried into town.

Clive Hinds, the man loading the luggage looked at the passenger. He placed a hand to his side and held it there as if a sharp pain had suddenly appeared.

“These things are pretty heavy. What could a miner be toting from one job to another that would be so weighty that it could almost cause me a strained gut-muscle?” The crewman asked.

“It’s really none of your business, is it,” the passenger told him, “and inquiries as such could get a fellow like you into a lot of trouble. This is supposed to be a “don’t ask, don’t tell” bit of an operation your Captain runs here on the Carpathia, isn’t it?”

Clive realized then, that he may have overstepped his bounds.

“Sorry, I meant no disrespect sir,” he spoke.

“Well, no harm inflicted,” Dehn informed him, “but for your ease, I do carry along the hefty tools of my trade. Mining shovels, pick axes and digging instruments. They do carry a bit of weight to them, you’d believe so wouldn’t you?”

Clive nodded that he agreed. But he also made note that if the fellow’s intent was to become employed at the Rockwell Mining Company, subcontractor of the main source of employment in the Gladys City township, he certainly could have left these heavy instruments of digging behind. It would be rather easy to acquire the tools that he needed from the Allmine Operations Company which ran the business. Still, like the man had mentioned, it

Comments
Wednesday, 21 December 2011 15:07
An Operative who gives only lip service to the idea of better worlds but reveals he's actually more into it for the money. Interesting.
Wednesday, 21 December 2011 15:36
“ …….One-hundred thousand is rather pointed to me. Yet what is life without work?” Jubal Early the bounty hunter, not an exact quote, but you get my meaning I’m sure Byte.

Dehn may be thinking about retirement in about five years or less, and the Assassins pension isn’t what it used to be…..lol. I see your point, thanks for the feedback my friend…

Just some thoughts, BPZ

PS: that is if anyone is allowed to retire from such a job. Not that many old folk in the core… :)
Wednesday, 21 December 2011 19:00
Oh my, this Operative Graham is baaad. You're definitely setting things up for a showdown between the Operatives. I'm wondering if "Carson" also noticed Graham--as an (ex-)Operative himself, he'd also be trained to notice things and track multiple conversations at once, wouldn't he? Maybe he even noticed exactly how Graham manipulated Clive. Also, thanks for the shout-out. Allmine Company seems to be everywhere. ;-)
Thursday, 22 December 2011 02:31
Hello eb!

Yepper, Allmine, Blue-Sun and thousands of other companies are likely being manipulated by some of the same folk in high, almost unattainable places. Now, it may be just me and my conspiracy paranoid self, but when there’s cameras poised on almost every street corner in the verse (at least in the core) folks usually can’t exit their homes without being watched. I’d be very leery of the folks representing Corporate, or government interests, especially out on the rim.

Glad that you enjoyed the shout-out with Allmine. Allmine is a company that is likely to be on every planet in every part of the verse where it is believed there’s a chance to make mineral claims. Or at least attain the rights as quickly as possible. Tell me if I’m wrong, I see them as the big gorilla on the block?

Also, I would think that “Carson” WAS aware of the conversations going on between Graham and Clive. Yet Clive was doing most the talking so Carson assumed that they were “aiming to misbehave” and be a little mischievous, but didn’t dwell on it much after that. Now in the morning when he hears of the murder, well, that might peak his interest a bit more.

And yes, a face off between operative & operative is certainly on the menu at some point. Showdown at high noon, and bring your best karate moves.

BPZ

PS: I see that you have a new fic up, I’m really ready to get to it and see what you have going. Probably hold off posting till morning though, see ya!

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