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Trouble for Nothing 2.0

Monday, November 28, 2011

Mal, Kaylee and Wash land on Persephone for hull inspection. He shouldn’t feel alarmed, but the Captain is always apprehensive about such things. He’s a little nervous, but remembers the advice of the family physician that used to be his doctor on Shadow. “Just take a sugar pill with your medicine and things will be alright” least that’s what ‘ol Doc Jenkins used to say. Of course Mal ain’t on Shadow anymore….. And his mom didn’t used sugar pills, she used castor oil…. as a chaser for medicine. And for those who are familiar with castor oil…..all I can say is that you have to sit still and let things progress naturally……BPZ

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3134    RATING: 0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Trouble for Nothing, Tricks for Free 2.0

Miranda, she….so filled with sorrow,

For many there, there’s no tomorrow,

They came, they saw, they looked, they fed,

The lucky one’s became the dead,

Their flesh was hell, their bodies mangled,

They cut their flesh and bodies tangled,

For them, no peace, no way to stop it,

Looking skyward, they searched for a prophet…..

From “Whispers of the Albatross” R. Tam’s ledger : 2517

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“ Port Authority to Serenity, you are cleared to land, “DOCK 15”! came the voice over the transport’s com system.

“ Affirm instructions, Serenity out!” Wash switched the mic over to audible control so that he could confer with Malcolm on the bridge.

“ Well, there we are Mal, set to dock and hope we can get this over with as quickly as possible.”

“ Agreed,” Mal said, as he watched his pilot make ready his landing approach.

“Soon as we’re on the ground, straighten things around here a bit, I want the ship to look as tidy and well attended as we can. We’re already late. I don’t want to have to answer any more questions than I have to. I want the boat to look neat and kept, not like we just rented her for a weekend picnic.”

“ But didn’t we just rent…..”

“ Yeah, I know, but they don’t have to,” the Captain finished before heading down to the cargo hold.

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Once on the ground, Malcolm Reynolds stood with his arms folded across his chest in the cargo bay of the Chameleon as Kaylee lowered the loading ramp. He was waiting for the inspection team to arrive and perform their look-over of his phony Firefly transport. Then he could receive his stamp of approval and be on his merry to contact Badger.

He heard a shuffling sound behind him and looked to see his ace pilot had come down to join him and Kaylee in the cargo hold.

Mal glanced over at Wash.

“Everything ready on the bridge?”

Wash looked at him.

“Ready to fool those fools that think they can come here and fool with us, tho

Comments
Monday, 28 November 2011 15:55
"Constipation" sorry about that. I guess when dealing with the Compliance Authority, there ain't no shit!

BPZ
Monday, 28 November 2011 16:08
I just loved Mal imagining Wash saying "when he was born he looked at his mother and quested, “ That was fun, can I go again?”--perfect Wash humor. Loved how Kaylee saved the day. So are we gonna find out what happened?
Monday, 28 November 2011 16:32
Eb

Glad that you got the humor of both the “intended” and the “unintended”……..

I showed my beta reader this….. They laughed their a$$ off also….. Just one of them things I guess.

Anyhoo, thanks for the quick response. Didn’t know how this would be received? Yeah, seems like each one of the crew, at one time or another pulls Mal’s a$$ out of the fire…lol.

I can see Mal thinking this of Wash too…..ha..ha..ha..

Yes….chap 3 is likely to be the final….. Thanks for sticking around for the story, even with all it’s flaws.

BPZ
Tuesday, 29 November 2011 00:24
Quick thinking by Kaylee, wonder how she pulled it off.
Wednesday, 30 November 2011 01:46
Howdy Byte....

Yepper, the Serenity mechanic has come through many a time to save the Captain. Might be that she had some help this time though. Can't say more.

see ya, BPZ

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