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Levels of Heaven: Depths of Hell part1

Monday, December 12, 2011

Post BDM. Let’s explore souls…..BPZ

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Levels of Heaven: Depths of Hell

Part - 1

Rovell Gammon looked at the mirror across the barroom countertop. He was sure that he didn’t like what he saw in the reflection. There was a man who’d age extensively over the passed several months looking back at him. He brought the liquor glass in his hand to his lips and emptied it’s remaining contents down his gullet. He looked over at the barkeep down at the other end of the counter and held up his empty glass indicating that he needed a refill.

Jed Sturgis, the bartender and owner of the Purple Garter, stopped working on the clean, clear glass he’d been polishing for the past fifteen minutes and reached down to pick up a fresh bottle of New Melbourne vodka #7. He walked back over to where Rovell sat sulking. Jed noticed something red dripping down his patron’s right temple.

“Fight with the Mrs. and now you’re in here wishing you hadn’t gambled that last ten coppers away so she wouldn’t have hit you with that glass vase and walked out on you.” It wasn’t a question, rather a curious sort of probing the bartender used to find out the purpose for this fellow being here.

The barkeep pointed to his own right temple in indication that there was something flowing down the side of Rovell’s face.

Gammon put his hand to his head and brought it before his eyes to see what the man had curiously been consulting him about. He noticed a smear of red across his fingertips.

“Blood!”

Rovell had been aware that there had been a pool of liquid gathering at his temple and was now running down the side of his face, but he had assumed that it had only been sweat, not blood. He became aware now that, along with the bruise that was swelling across his right temple, there was also a cut exposing the injury from the altercation he’d been involved in thirty minutes prior.

“Damn you Malcolm Reynolds,” he thought, “ damn you and all those aboard your vessel,” he had to place blame on someone, why shouldn’t it be put on the best adversary he’d ever h

Comments
Tuesday, 13 December 2011 14:23
GOOD start here, BPZ. It's interesting to see this from the Operative's perspective. I like the details you've brought in to fill out the Operative's background, and the tie ins to familiar characters like Badger and the crew that you've dropped into the text without making a fuss over it. Nice introduction with a good balance of exposition and action, scene setting, tension building, and forward motion. I'm interested to see what happens next.
Tuesday, 13 December 2011 21:17
Howdy eb,

I’m glad that you like the first installment of LOH:DOH. I did get a bit more graphic with the “hands-on” gratuitous violence in this one…..but as you know, the universe isn’t all sunflowers and buttercups. Well, maybe Blue-Sun flowers…….

Persephone may be getting a little “Hot” for the Operative to stay there much longer. LOH:DOH #2 might find him on another planet, or out in space, and possibly with a new identity. I can tell ya that the Authority is becoming pretty tired of bounty hunters failing to bring him in. Maybe they’ll start sending government assassin next…..what’d ya think?

Thanks for the feedback, BPZ

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