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Levels of Heaven: Depths of Hell part2

Sunday, December 18, 2011

This chapter….not much of a connection to chapter one, but the link is coming. Introducing a few new characters and the meaning and purpose of their mindset. Hope you enjoy and continue to follow….BPZ

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Levels of Heaven: Depths of Hell

Part - 2

Bucky Tosskin

Candice Naples

Gladys City

Carpathia : Star Cruiser/ cargo vessel : troop transport.

Battle of Sturges.

Minear 2

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Bucky Tosskin pulled his wagon rig up next to the area where he kept his beasts. He unhooked the rope cord from around the wind chimes, which were attached to a pole at the back of his buckboard.

“Time to feed the beasties,” he said as he grabbed the small chain that hung down and ran through the middle of the chimes. He pulled the chain and began to whip it around vigorously. The sounds it made were very familiar to folk that worked out in the countryside on the farms and ranches of the border and rim worlds. It was the ringing sound of the “chuck wagon” announcing that supper was served, or in this case ,breakfast.

“Time to eat, you ravenous creatures!” Bucky shouted as he released the chain and climbed down the buckboard.

At that moment, the sound of a aircraft flying overhead focused his attention skyward. A spacecraft had descended through the atmosphere and was now on a direct path towards the small town of Gladys City on the small moon of Minear 2. That was odd in itself, not very many space vessels made their way to this lonely world, and certainly not many to these parts. Yet this was the second craft he’d witnessed that day.

The first had been a Firefly transport vessel identified as “Serenity” by her hull markings. Bucky had smiled when he’d seen that vessel. He had been friends with the Captain who commanded that ship. An acquaintance from his younger, wilder days, after the Unification War.

Bucky had been in contact with the commander of Serenity through cortex messages, and the Captain had asked, once they’d landed, if they could meet in the township of Gladys City? He had agreed, and would soon venture into town to see his friend, as soon as he finished feeding his critters. It would be good to see his old friend and meet his crew.

Comments
Monday, 19 December 2011 04:59
This is really shiny!!(((: I figured after the last chapter that that was what was up with Zoe((: I loved everybody's reactions:D keep up the shiny writing!
Monday, 19 December 2011 23:49
Hiya ShinyZoeKaylee!

Thanks,….I’m glad you like the story so far. I’m thinking that the next chapter will be a bit darker than this one though. I’ll be introducing a new character with somewhat of a mean-streak, and certainly a nastiness that rivals some of the real folk I know. Well, maybe they aren’t really as bad as this guy. Anyway, thanks again for your comment. Hope you hang on for chapter 3.

Still holdin, BPZ
Wednesday, 21 December 2011 00:22
Hello BPZ,
Good to see another installment from you. I just LOVED this: "Wouldn’t the opposite of disillusioned be illusioned? Were the folk of the core being illusioned into thinking that all was “Well” with the verse? "--both funny and made a serious point at the same time. Clever turn of phrase. I liked the scene with Mal, Inara and Kaylee, and their different reactions to the news of Zoe's baby. I also thought Simon and Mal's conversation about "female ailments" was funny. I'm thinking that something's up with that Star Cruiser, and that it's something not good for Serenity's crew. And what's with Bucky thinking Jayne is the Captain of Serenity? Is that just Jayne shading the truth or what? (No, don't answer that! :-) I want to find out in due course as you post this.) I'm also wondering if we'll meet Bucky's niece in person at some point.
Wednesday, 21 December 2011 04:41
Howdy eb!

Thanks for posting your thoughts on the second installment of LOH:DOH. At the beginning of this story arc I wasn’t sure what I wanted to title it. Then knowing that I wanted to express a wide range of emotion from the characters involved (from extreme happiness to complete anxiety and dread) Levels of Heaven: Depths of Hell, just came to mind. Almost as if the Shepherd were still around to deliver a sermon.

Anyhoo, working on chap 3 now, and like I expressed to ShinyZoeKaylee it will be a bit more detailed and darker. A nasty cloud is about to descend on the little township of Gladys City. Several of your thoughts about things coming up in chap 3 are near spot on! I hope I still have some surprises for you though…

Now, glad that you like the conversation with Simon and Mal about “female ailments” that was done in jest. Malcolm Reynolds is very versatile and can do a lot of things, but understanding the female condition is more “hit & miss“ with him. Not saying he wouldn’t make a good uncle, or father.

The thing about Captain Jayne is, ……well, I think you said you wanted to wait until the next chapter. It’s just about finished and should be ready in a day or two.

Thanks for the feedback eb, and ShinyZoeKaylee!

Still holdin, BPZ

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