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Polished Memories 1.0- Boot Camp

Friday, November 11, 2011

New approach at mixing things up a little. “Polished Memories” folk trying to sort through their emotions and feelings, and make themselves feel better. Doesn’t always work.

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Polished Memories 1.0

******************** Boot Camp *********************

Humankind has always felt the need to struggle. It’s in our blood, in our bones. Maybe it was ingrained within our DNA when we were but rodents crawling upon the ground, or maybe it was injected into us when the aliens first decided that they would give us a boost up the evolutionary ladder. Or maybe, just maybe, God soaked our souls in the waters of turmoil and strife to force us to make an account of ourselves. Whatever one’s belief, it must be admitted that we do not do well without an enemy. If we don’t have one, we’ll invent one.

After our exit from ETW all that time ago, we found a new place, a new home. There were no enemies here, only unpopulated planets and moons…….the system itself could be enemy enough. So we fought, we worked, we brought terraforming to the worlds, and we forced them to become ours. To become worlds we could live on, survive on. Now that the verse was conquered and there could be a time of peace, it was not enough. We still needed that competition, that enemy. One that we could defeat. One that we could struggle against. Looking around, who would it be?

With humankind being masters of the sky, who could we fight? We found someone….ourselves.

Shepherd’s Chronicles : 2519

----------------------------------------------- BOOT CAMP ------------------------------------------------------

The officer stood in one of the supply huts looking out at the crowd gathering on the assembly grounds. They’d come from all over the verse, Salisbury, Aberdeen, St. Albans, Shadow, even worlds and moons that didn’t have names yet. Still here they were, ready to fight, or to learn how. The Lieutenant paused for a moment and thought, such cattle being led to the slaughter. It was his job to train them, get them ready, the moment was at hand. Time to put on his war face and look mean and nasty before beginning his speech.

The crowd outside was waiting to become soldiers. He would do what he cou

Comments
Saturday, 12 November 2011 22:37
So...first view of Tracy, and he's already showing those characteristics...I'm hoping that the incident with the Colonel's mustache is going to be part of your story here. Loved the details you provided of Mal's life on the ranch, the former military ranch hand Andy, Mal's ma...also really liked that you showed or hinted at Mal's skills in shooting and wrestling as a youngster--skills that were obviously very important to him in later life. And I see that you're bringing in Lt Gardner from your other story to play a role here. Also liked that you're not portraying Mal as an instant "golden boy"--he gets latrine duty. I have a feeling that he's going to get a lot worse than latrine duty before it's over. I wonder if you're going to show Mal using his talent for improvisation to good effect at some point here.
Sunday, 13 November 2011 00:20
Howdy EB…..

Glad that you liked that Tracy was in this story. Yepper, I do have plans on showing how much of a cut-up misfit he was……but he still had a good heart because his motives for trying to steal those innards wasn’t for himself but…..well you know the story behind that.

Anyway with this new set of story arcs I’m looking to jump around a bit. “Polished Memories” is about folk thinking back upon their past lives. What they would change, maybe! What they would do the same, and with some of the things that have happened, how we, as a human race might try to justify our acts of cruelty, or our bad behavior in any fashion. We tend to want to clean those things up, polished them so that they look better to us. Just an idea I’m kicking around.

Also I’m thinking of exploring me some Kaylee, and some Jayne, in their earlier lives, before they signed on with Serenity. I think that might be fun! There will be other Mal stuff, but these stories will jump around a bit. Not be in a continuous stream of 6 to 8 chapters. They will be maybe 1 or 2 at the most….

I will say that many of the writers here have me doing the fan-fic thing more than I would normally do. The stories on FFFans.net help me to envision each story as if it were a new episodes of Firefly even without seeing them on tv. I like that, and want to contribute to it, so that’s pretty good motivation right there.

Stay writing and I will keep reading everyone! I may not be able to answer all the time….but I try, because I do love me some Firefly!

BPZ
Tuesday, 15 November 2011 18:11
Early Kaylee and Early Jayne both have a lot of appeal. I'd like to know what they were up to, before they signed on with Serenity.

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