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MIA chap5 Final-Clash of the Titans

Thursday, November 3, 2011

More like Clash of the bed fleas or dust mites. But that can be a good thing. Being the small guys can keep you off the Alliance radar and have the old bloodhounds barking up the wrong tree. Petty crime can pay well enough, yet not have the Feds crawling up your backside…. Oh yeah, also, Mal & Zoe pick up the heat in this one. I’ll not say more. Maybe Wash does have a reason to be jealous? Hope you enjoy the final of “Missing in Action” BPZ

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MIA part 5

--------------- Clash of the Titans --------------

“ Holy Beylix!” Malcolm Reynolds and his second in command, Lieutenant Zoe, were transfix almost as if they were Jayne Cobb statues themselves.

There, not fifteen feet away stood a man that could be Jayne Cobb’s brother! No…….! He could be Jayne Cobb himself!

Had Cody Cobb asked Mal to tell him war stories about Serenity Valley, it woulda shocked the be-jeebs out of the Captain. Not because Mal knew Cody had been there and experienced such horror himself, but because all he could see was Jayne’s face. More likely he would have asked the doc to take a look at him and examine his brain. But this was Cody Cobb they were looking at, not Jayne. At the time Mal and Zoe couldn’t establish the difference.

Cody Cobb smiled at the two individuals that stood there like manikins. He KNEW what was going through their heads.

“ So! We ready to do this or what!!?” Jayne spoke, breaking the spell the two were under.

Mal and Zoe both recovered.

“Ok, so who was flying this crate?”

Cody raised his hand.

“Good! Put your Tyvek back on,” he looked over at Jeebs, “ Frizbie, you watch the others while we continue with the plan!”

Mal loved making up names during a heist. He would get them wrong sometimes, but who gave a “go tsao de?”(dog humping)….calling someone by a different name each time made it more fun!

After sixteen minutes of organizing things, Mal, Zoe, Jayne & Cody continued on route to the town of Absolution. Mal would still be the driver, but for the first couple hundred yards Cody was made to fly the hovercraft in order to keep any suspicion down of him being a co-conspirator. The contract security guards always made their pick-ups with four people. With the headgear and the goggles Jayne and Cody were wearing, none of his coworkers, nor the townsfolk would be able to see their mirror image. In seven minutes the hovercraft pulled into Absolution, and posted in front of the bank.

It was an average day, in the averag

Comments
Thursday, 03 November 2011 14:32
Hello Browncoats!

Just finished this this morning, so I rushed it a bit. Forgive any errors that may be posted within the work, I just hope that it’s done well enough to be entertaining. Anyhoo, My true intention was to get it posted before going back to work. Still, let me know about the errors.

There are KEY people that helped me stay inspired to finish this….., No, they’re not in Parliament! My thanks to them all!

We still HOLD! BPZ
Thursday, 03 November 2011 23:09
Yep. Saw that coming.

Nice shout out at the end.
GWG
Friday, 04 November 2011 01:13
See ONE MAN’S TRASH (08) Part (06) By ebfiddler
“This child is not Jayne’s.”
Friday, 04 November 2011 09:32
Bytemite, “ Saw that coming.”….yes you did my friend….

gwg, what ever are you talking about……ha..ha..ha…just kidding with ya.

Thanks for the feedback browncoats!

BPZ
Friday, 04 November 2011 23:57
Wonderful ending, BPZ. Saw that coming, but it was Still an exciting chase/heist/action/reunion scene. And Janice! So THAT's what really happened on Higgins Moon! ;-) Thanks for the shout-out. :-)
Saturday, 05 November 2011 10:57
Howdy ebfiddler

Glad that you liked the fic. Yepper, guess that it was pretty obvious that there would be a showdown between Serenity & Ajax. It was just meant to happen, and the Cody thang! Just something cooked up for a little story fun. Hop you didn’t mind that I kinda hi-jacking your story a bit. I really meant no harm, and I think I left plenty of wiggle room for Cody to make the same claim as Jayne, only he may not be able to get off the hook so easily.

Great story-telling by you all!

It’s about 6am here, and I just got home from work. I’m a bit tired but I wanted to shout -out to you & Bytemite & Brewster and say that I appreciate ya’ll following the story and helping me out with things.

Time for me to hit the sack I believe. Keep writing everyone…..BPZZZZZZZZZ.
Saturday, 05 November 2011 12:34
Oh, I don't mind at all! This makes you the first writer I know of to reference any of my stories directly...very cool. And flattering. Thank you. Feel free to write Cody into any kind of box you want to put him in! (And if Janice is in there, too...) ;-) 'Cuz that Cody thang...didn't see THAT coming.

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