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MIA chap2

Saturday, October 22, 2011

They tended to become mercenaries after the U-war. Jayne’s cousin, Cody Cobb was a Browncoat-Ferret/ ……….“Oh Lester quit your bellyaching you soft ass! Next you’ll be wanting a bunk in the Serenity Hilton!” One soldier was telling the other.

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Serenity Valley- Battle for Batean Gorge : part 2

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Hoping to create a little interest in this type of storytelling. A little blood & guts added in for good measure..BPZ

Non-Canon points of order:

*Brownghost: Elite fighting teams formed by the Independence Army. Known for their stealth and their abilities to neutralize the Alliance advantages of waging war. Unlike the Red Panther and other elite forces of the browncoats, which were kill squads, the Brownghosts coda focused less on killing and concentrated more on destroying Unification hardware and equipment.

* “Cluster Busters” or FF9-80Z are Fixed-wing aircraft that the Independence Air Forces used to intimidate and help win the victories of several small conflicts during the “War of Unification”. Operated by a single pilot, the FF(Freedom-Fighter) 9-80Z were a small assault craft fighter, smaller than a shuttle on Serenity. The Independence side had about 100 of these.

*Brown-Ferret: Intel gathering mole, Freedom- fighter that gathered important information concerning the deployment of Allied troops, missions, and any other advantage they could swing in the Independence’s favor. These folk were akin to the Australian Bushmen during the fight with the Axis side during WW2 back on Earth That Was. They tended to become mercenaries after the U-war. Jayne’s cousin, Cody Cobb was a Browncoat-Ferret.

Now on to the story------

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It was 2:45 in the afternoon when Lieutenant Gardner made his way from his hiding position in gully 133 to an area just north of the Alliance held position of Batean Gorge. There was an old, bombed-out farmhouse on a hillside located there, and the Lieutenant meant to use it as his recon post before the attack got underway.

The Independence armies always seemed to preferr launching their attacks during the day rather than at night. One reason being that the Alliance forces used their satellite heat tracking systems to their b

Comments
BREWSTER
Saturday, 22 October 2011 17:39
Looks interesting - nice to have a story of the early days.
Saturday, 22 October 2011 18:34
Thank you Brewster!
So much of the War was left untold by the warriors that had experienced it (in the tradition of Platoon) Thought I’d add a small piece to what I think may have been an event that figured in to the conflict as seen through the eyes of someone that would have been there…..ie Lt. Gardener.

Your feedback is very appreciated. Thank you again….BPZ
Thursday, 27 October 2011 03:13
And now, action! You certainly bring it on, with lots of noise and fire. I liked the build-up as the Lt does the final recon from the chimney. I did not expect that it was a set-up...good job making that a surprise for the reader as well as the characters. Hope to see more of Mal and Zoe in the next. Looks like you'll have something interesting coming right up. Sorry not to review sooner...got behind on my reading.
Friday, 28 October 2011 00:59
Hello ebfiddler!

I totally understand how it is. I get behind on my reading, writing and actually posting on those things as well.

Just coming off a 5 day, 60 hour work week, so I’ve had little time to do anything. Anyhoo, thanks for your comments. I ready enjoyed them. Hoping to catch up on some excellent stories posted here on FireflyFans.net over the next couple of days, and maybe even write another chap or two myself.

The next installment of “MIA” will certainly have more Mal, Zoe, Jayne, Kaylee & the other crew members. I’m looking to bring it more in to the Firefly realm since this is a FF story, and the crew we all enjoy so much will become a bigger part of it.

Thanks again for your feedback, it means a lot. BPZ
Wednesday, 02 November 2011 16:33
Decided to try to catch up with this story. Looking good so far, I like all your names you've come up with. Also, I think your fast-paced storytelling style works well with this kind of story.

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