Blue Sun Room FICTION - DRAMA

One to Many chap 6

Sunday, October 9, 2011

The Serenity crew find themselves in a fix, and this whole situation needs to be fixed. But to paraphrase Kaylee, “ Sometimes things can’t be fixed.” The hole of ever increasing troubles that the team find themselves in has steadily grown deeper. Mal ain’t a religious man, but he would pray to a Bellerophon sea squid if he thought it could get him outta this mess. Of course Mal ain’t about to pray to anybody. His wit and cunning have won him through his travels thus far, and the resourcefulness of his crew. Have they reached their limits this time? And what about Jayne? Read on to find out if they all die…….

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One To Many- chap 6

-----Diffusion ------

The spacecraft took off into the daytime sky. It attracted every eye, from every guard, posted in every tower along the Fay Everett Mountain Ridge at Fort Oliver. Why? Because none of them had ever seen anything like it before.

Fort Oliver may have been an Alliance outpost out in the middle of nowhere, on a no-account moon that even Reavers may consider a waste of time. Yet the outpost was still a functioning fortification. It still received supplies bi-monthly, and was able to acquire the newest and most advanced tech weaponry the Unified military could offer. However, what the guards were witnessing in the skies above the mountain fortress was much more advanced than anything they’d set eyes on before.

What they were seeing wasn’t Serenity, no, that spacecraft had left hours before, also there were forty thousand Firefly transports still flying around the verse, more or less. This was something strange and different, as rare as seeing a pink canary. This ship was beautiful, all sleek and trim-lined, and maybe a little larger than your average shuttlecraft. It’s design announced higher technology , and it’s frame spoke stealth, and an almost impossible speed and maneuverability. The troops at FO only saw it for a few seconds, then it disappeared over the horizon and was out of sight.

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River Tam, her brother Simon, and Serenity’s mechanic and pilot, Kaylee and Wash, were all aboard this vessel. They were being contained (confined within a back room) all together this time.

“ I wonder where we’re headed?” Wash asked out loud, not particular to anyone.

“ Can’t be someplace good,” Kaylee, for the first time let down her guard of cheerfulness, “ If purplebellies are involved, ain’t nothing nice can come of it. Beside they stole Serenity! When the captain finds out he won’t be a happy camper,” she finished.

“ Camping may be the least of his worries Kaylee, “ Wash offered

Comments
Monday, 10 October 2011 02:04
Well, this is certainly a twist, BPZ. How are Mal and Zoe and Jayne taking the news? Seems to me Mal and Zoe ain't heard the news, and if Jayne heard it, he heard a different version. Good development of your plot, here. And you certainly win a prize for your teaser of an introduction, with its Bellerophon sea squid and all!
Monday, 10 October 2011 11:17
Ebfiddler, thanks for your comments. I really appreciate you words. Yepper, you caught on right quick in your post for OTM chap 5 that the IMBs where a bit more “human” then the actual blue handed folk in the show. Obviously there was a reason for that.

The next chap is being generated at this time, and the captain, Zoe and Jayne are finding out the news right now. Some people would be happy to find out that they aren’t headed for the gallows, maybe Mal won’t be. Oh, he’ll be happy that he ain’t gonna die, but the captain don’t like being kept, in any fashion!

Thank you again for the feedback.

BPZ

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