One To Many- chap 5
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It wasn’t a bird of prey, it was a scavenger. Perched high atop a rocky outcropping it viewed the entire rugged landscape with binocular vision. It noticed the trespassers of it’s territory down below. It spread it’s feathers wide.
From expanded wingtip to wingtip, it seemed to be measuring the vastness of it’s abode. It screeched a warning to the invaders, “This is my territory! You have no reason for being here unless you be a corpse, or about to become one!”
The men in dark suits standing in the rocky sand below barely gave the screams of the scavenger bird notice. Their mission more important than any distraction of some desert dweller. They were working on finalizing the details on what they would do next.
“ So, you head to the Alliance compound at Fort Oliver to secure the remainder of Serenity’s crew, while I head into the void and await your arrival. After the rendezvous we will make contact with our superiors and await instructions on our next move.”
The shorter of the two looked at the taller man.
“ What if things go wrong?”
The taller suited fellow wearing blue gloves looked at his companion,
“ Nothing will.”
“ And the others, Riley and his crew?” The shorter questioned.
“ We do what we always do. Out here in the desert is a fine place, don’t you think?” He looked over to the big boulder on which the big, dark scavenger bird was sitting , “ He’s hungry. The creatures on the rim need to be fed just as the ones who rule the universe. We do what we can. ”
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Malcolm Reynolds awoke with a jolt. For some reason he had lost consciousness while tied to the bulkhead of the Alliance shuttle he and his fellow captives were being transported in. He looked over at Zoe and Jayne. They had been out cold also, but were now regaining their senses.
“ Captain, where are we?” Zoe questioned while rubbing her
Now I will address the rest of your comments with somewhat of a riddle.
ebfiddler my friend, you are a detective of fine detail……for someone having witnessed the genius of Firefly for only a year and a half…..in my opinion, you certainly have a tight grasp of those who populate the verse. Your writing shows me such. Those little things….. they tell so much. Anyway, I really do appreciate the feedback.
I hope to throw some surprises at folk that read my stories. I do quite enjoy when the landing is thought to be in San Diego when it actually lands in Boston….(smile)
BPZ
I imagine that is not standard - or legal - Alliance operating procedure.
"Jayne relaxed his blade against the man’s throat. His expression changed from one of aggression, to one of opportunity.
“ What sort of deal?” He asked."
Something tells me that even Jayne wouldn't really work with spooks looking to lock him up and doublecross him, though he might pretend like it.
Jayne is an opportunist, imo. Whether he is ready to act on an opportunity, or not, he always like to hear the options. It makes his mouth water.
Also there are some things that can’t be said about the HOB guys at this moment. More will come out in the next chapter. Which is going up soon.
Thanks for the feedback BM…
BPZ
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