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Damaged Goods-Chap1 Rehashed

Sunday, July 10, 2011

Sorry my browncoat friends that it has taken me so long to get back to witting. A lot has happen during that time. Still, I felt it was necessary to start from the beginning of this campaign. Below is the rehashed version of a fan fiction I began , and posted long ago. I hope those who read it for the first time will enjoy it, and those who remember it’s first incantation enjoy it the second time around. The story arch is near completion now and I hope to finalize it’s ending before the week is over. My thanks to everyone who’ve left comments on any of my FFFiction, and I hope to write more and do a better job with upcoming stories. The Firefly universe has never stopped living in my world and I hope it is the same for you. Live long and prosper…..Oh sorry, wrong show! We HOLD! And I truly mean that….see ya BP.

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Damaged Goods: Part 1a Rehashed

Prologue:

Mal and the crew of Serenity find themselves on a return trip back towards the core planets. Their latest mission completed, the payment, although beneficial to Serenity, wasn’t so enjoyable as paying jobs go. They had delivered furniture to an old family acquaintance of Kaylee’s. Not that Mal saw anything wrong in doing this, but there was no exchange of coin or hard currency in the deal. It was more of a bartered application. Furniture for engine parts. Mal really disliked not getting paid…..but after what had happened with the engine catalyzer not so long ago, he had decided that if his mechanic needed a part for Serenity, then he’d better listen. That was the trade-off, but unknown to her crew at the moment, there was much more in store for Serenity during this voyage, much more….

Damaged Goods: Part 1

Malcolm Reynolds climbed down the structure to his bunk in the area of Serenity’s crew hall. Grabbing the suspenders of his daywear he began to undress until he noticed a small Babushka doll sitting on the desk of his wave monitor. He stopped and walked over to the simple play-thing.

He uncorked the doll, but instead of there being another, smaller doll inside he found a piece of paper with writing. He opened it up and read the note……..

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Twenty-four minutes later; Ship’s galley:

“ Come on Mal it’s been over thirty days since we had a decent payin’ job. Least we could do is check out Badger’s latest wave and decide if runnin insect cadavers over to the “School of Arachnid Studies” on Osirus would be worth our while,” Serenity’s resident mercenary Jayne Cobb was saying as he sat in a galley chair by the crew table.

“ No Jayne! Hauling dead bugs around the verse would be better left to the kind of folk who enjoy transporting weaving materials, or helium balloons to those who value them out on the rim worlds. We ain’t gotten that desperate yet.”

“ We’ve been close,” Wash, the pilot of

Comments
Sunday, 10 July 2011 21:23
That was a interesting and slightly odd start. But I am interested in seeing where it goes and I never read your other version of the fic.
Sunday, 10 July 2011 21:40
Thanks for your comments Nutluck. I’m glad that you’ve found this first re-installment of the fan fic “ Damaged Goods” as interesting. Part 2 will be going up shortly, and it was as far as I’d taken the story arch in the beginning. At the start of part 3 everything will be new. Hope you enjoy…….BP

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