Damaged Goods Part 3
Prologue:
Malcolm Reynolds, owner and commander of the Firefly transport Serenity has been influenced by The youngest passenger aboard his boat, River. The younger Tam has ways of knowing things that both baffle and intrigue the folk aboard Serenity. Truth being that they are, at times, scared of the girl. Yet it’s a fear that hasn’t really given them reason for throwing the girl and her brother out. After all Simon is a very fine doctor, and Mal, despite his rugged composition still knows right from wrong. Still the girl is a mystery. As long as the doctor keeps his sister roped in, and if possibly her abilities can provide an advantage to the team of the little transport, then there is really no reason for the Captain to drop them off on the nearest colonized planet. Everyone aboard ship is there for a reason……does River give the crew of Serenity the edge?
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Damaged Goods Part 3
Mal Reynolds, along with his pilot Wash on Serenity’s bridge, eyeballed the craft floating before them with suspicion. The ship was tiny……even smaller than Serenity by almost half.
“ Seems serine enough.” Wash spoke.
“Yeah, not to my liking.” Mal added not taking his view away from the vessel.
“ Ship’s scan shows that her communications are down. There’s no way for her to produce an outbound signal. Only way for someone to know she’s here is to bounce a signal off her and track it back to the vessel themselves.”
“ Advice from an old tracker Wash. You wanna find someone, use your eyes.” Mal spoke one of his favorite bits of testament.
“ Maybe a trap. Do a scan of the surrounding area. See if someone is about other than our friend here.” The Captain ordered.
“ Already done. Didn’t find anything bigger than a beach ball. There’s no one waiting to jump us. The ship seems to be alone and stranded. Just like River said.” Serenity’s pilot confirmed.
Mal hesitated a second. It had come to that moment. The m
Still, awesome cliffie...though a few minutes with a beta reader would be a further improvement of a gem. I'd be happy to help out if you would like...
:D
If you would like to have a beta reader, I'd be glad to volunteer.
Thank you both for your comments and thank you both for you offer. I may do that. One of the things, for me, when I decide to post up fan-fiction is that I become impatient. I do have someone to pitch in and help with this at home (my spouse) but often times when I finish a story she may be busy or not home at the time. After a couple of quick read-throughs I just get eager and post the fic as is. Lots of times that’s when I catch several mistakes.
Anyway, thank you both again for your offer as beta readers. Could be a while before the next chapter is ready.
Now as for the story……
BEB, yeah….The young Tam did pull a fast one on Mal, and the crew of Serenity. Why? Knowing the captain, at least like I think I do, there would be no way he would have agreed to a rescue mission and certainly no way he would have risked Serenity for a deal as such. Still, River had her plans well thought out and she’s not finished yet, there’s more. I’m glad that you like the story so far and I hope to keep it interesting for you.
Greenka61, in my estimation there are dozens, maybe hundreds, or even as much as a couple thousand, academy students in the Joss verse. They could have similar or separate abilities, and at different levels. The powers that be aren’t shy about exploitation. Once it becomes apparent that someone can become useful ( including children/ get them while their young) there are no problems with nurturing them for use by the government. Fact is these folk actually scare the higher achy. What better way to stay in power than to keep future ousters under control. The unseen monsters are the ones we fear the most at times I think.
Just the way I see it.
Thanks for the feedback Browncoats…..see ya, ZBP
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