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Saw That Coming Part 5

Monday, March 21, 2011

It’s finally come to this. The crew of Serenity head into the black with a shipment of goods held within their cargo hold. There may be folk waiting down the line. Authorities? Government agents? Who knows…….Are the Captain and Kaylee safe? What about the doc and his sister?

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Saw That Coming : Part 5

Players:

Crew of Serenity

Billy Bester

Jacob Hanover

Stranger #1

Stranger #2

Prologue:

It’s finally come to this. The crew of Serenity head into the black with a shipment of goods held within their cargo hold. There may be folk waiting down the line. Authorities? Government agents? Who knows…….Are the Captain and Kaylee safe? What about the doc and his sister? The story continues below.

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Saw That Coming 5

Malcolm Reynolds stood at the top of Serenity’s loading ramp looking out across the huge expanse of Bixby Canyon.

“ Mighty fine place for an ambush.” He said as he viewed the area surrounding his ship. “ That is, if someone had a notion we were coming.”

He turned to see Jayne entering the cargo bay.

“ Jayne! How-bout throw a canvas tarp over those crates so that they stay outta sight should any visitors show!”

The big merc looked at the captain.

“ Mal, who in the ruttin hell would show up out here?”

The look in the captains eyes only told him that orders were not to be questioned, just obeyed. Shepherd Book offered to help. Malcolm Reynolds continued with another task for Jayne…..

“ After that……take Kaylee down to the watering hole and………” Before he could finish there was the sound of approaching hovercraft. In the distance he witnessed three hover vehicles all shiny and well decaled displaying credentials that informed him that they indeed were official vehicles. There looked to be three or four men in each vehicle. They flew in close and came to a stop not fifty feet from Serenity.

The crew of the little transport stood at the bottom of the ramp. All with their mouths hanging open.

“ Mornin travelers!” The tallest of the arrivals spoke with a greeting. Serenity’s Captain, mechanic, mercenary for hire and ship’s preacher offered no greetings in return. They all stood there seemingly surprised beyond speech.

Hanover smiled at their shock at being ap

Comments
Tuesday, 22 March 2011 00:40
This did make me laugh, such a nice change for Mal and the crew to come out on top and loved Atherton being put in his place. As for the odious Bester, wonder what will happen to him? Nothing good, I hope. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Wednesday, 23 March 2011 02:05
Yea! I'm so glad there are more new parts to this story. Thank you, thank you, thank you!

Wednesday, 23 March 2011 14:37
Alison, Greenka61.…..greetings!

Thank you both for your feedback. It is instrumental in having me pursue the pleasurable task of creating FF fan-fic. I have actually added another chap to the “ Saw That Coming” story fic. I wasn’t happy with all the loose ends that were just taken for granted as reader-acceptance.

Hoping that the final issue clears up what was happening while the Captain and his small band of ruffians were down on the surface of Demeter. See ya…….

ZBP

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