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Battle Scars - 4.3 Face-Off

Sunday, October 24, 2010

“ Battle Scars 4.3” is now up……Hope folk like the story thus far. I’m off work this weekend, so between bouts with dogs, kats,(< lol) and kids I’ve squeezed in a couple chaps to the story arc. Think it will be finishing up around chap 4.4.…anyway , getting ready to start a new workweek Monday, which means less time on the FFF. Boards for me. I will be able to catch up on most of the fan-fic of my browncoat friends next weekend though. Till then Happy Halloween. Hey! Anyone ever think of dressing up as JAYNE for All Hollows Eve?….. “ Pain is scary”….or should I say “ Jayne is scary.” …..lol….see ya…. BPZ.

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Battle Scars

Chapter 4.3- Face-Off

The Setup

Malcolm Reynolds, and Serenity, had taken the crew of the Alliance vessel Stephen J. Hawking under armed management. This had happened because Mal had become suspicious early on that he wasn’t dealing with actual Alliance officials. His suspicious had panned out correctly. The crew of the Alliance vessel were no more than pirates, just as themselves…..with one distinct difference, these folk didn’t mind killing. Fact being….they had a taste for it.

Just as things seem to be going in Mal’s favor, there came a twist in the situation. A critical one. This being the capture of Inara, Simon and River. Things weren’t looking so good for the passengers on Serenity that more or less called the ship home. This wouldn’t speak well for Mal if he couldn’t protect his crew, or semi-crew as it were.

Anyway, things are gonna happen……………does blood congeal in the vacuum of space I wonder? You’ll have to read on to find out who’s blood (if anyone’s) will be floating in the void of blackness, or if blood remains in liquid form without the presents of oxygen.

Chapter 4.3- Face-Off

Mal Reynolds knew he had to come up with something quick to bargain his way out of his current situation. He pressed the com button next to the link-up hatch.

“ Doc you there?”

“ Yeah!” Came the answer.

“ Ri…….Rebecca okay?” Mal followed Inara’s lead in disguising River’s true identity.

“ Yeah, …….concerned though!” Simon answered.

“ Well, that’s an understatement…..” He paused, “ Don’t worry, we’ll work something out. Let me talk with your patient.” Simon put his sister on the com…..

“ Hello Rebecca? How are you little one?”

“ I’m fine. Beware of the Sun Blue…..it will fall from above.” She said.

That was the best answer Mal could have hoped for. He looked over at the commander of the Stephen J. Hawking.” Your move.” implying as if this were a game of chess, checkers or toll cards.

“ Ok Capt’n. Who are they, and what is their importance to you?” Baggard quest

Comments
Sunday, 24 October 2010 17:10
Love, lov, LOVED this! Especially Mal turning the tables on the rotten pirates and that can of Blue Sun falling down and knocking their pilot out. Oh brilliant, how I laughed with glee! Shiny, Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Sunday, 24 October 2010 23:33
Wonderful. I loved this as well. You have a great way of adding humor to an otherwise serious fight and I like that. Great stuff, BPZ!
Monday, 25 October 2010 22:51
Alison & Angelle thanks for your posts!

Always glad to get feedback from fellow browncoats.

Alison, yeah, at first I thought I would have Shepherd Book drill the unlucky Alliance pilot with a can of Blue Sun veggies, like a professional baseball pitcher. But then I thought that, that may do a little more damage than what was needed to just knock the guy out. It became a little more poetical for River to just drop the Blue Sun can with the label still on it ( being that in an actual episode of FF she was ripping labels off the cans).

Angelle, always glad to get posts from you! Yepper, I am happy that you see a lot of humor in much of the fic I write. That is actually how it is intended to be seen……just average, every day funny stuff. What would this world be like if we, as humans didn’t laugh at ourselves sometimes (or Jayne) ?

Thank you both again for your comments…. They mean a lot!

BPZ

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