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Battle Scars- Chapter 2

Thursday, October 14, 2010

Part 2 of “Battle Scars” is up. I took a bit of “writer liberty” with the first section of the work just for a little fun. Hope my jest is seen for what it is,…….Now, the “Battle Scars” story arc will progress at a leisurely pace because I really am playing this by ear. I really have no idea what I should write to fill in the middle void….so if you had suggestions, I’ll have my Alliance mail address below. Of course I do have an ending. If you guess what it is or you have better one….then I’ll just have to blow Serenity up! Killing everyone and ending the series right there! I’m just jokin…like I have the power to actually do that? But really, if you have an idea I will attempt to put it in. Anyway, after that please don’t take me serious….I am but a browncoat wanting to enjoy a little fun with my writing…BP, out. Zzetta13@sbcglobal.net

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Battle Scars

Chapter 2 - Discovery

The Setup

Mal Reynolds and the rest of the crew of Serenity are on their way to Paquin. In their cargo hold hidden away in several of those secret places on Serenity that “don’t exist“, is booty acquired by another one of Badger’s contract ship’s for hire named the “Vulture”.

Vulture is captained by a descendant of people native to the old North American continent on “Earth That Was” . His name is Ira Eggers and he is a veteran of the battle of Serenity Valley.

Ira, recently was freed from a government detainment center and now he and his crew are on the run. They still need to eat though so they are hired by Badger on occasion to perform tasks that are risky and dangerous.

Ira had been held on a testing planet because, after the war, it was found that he had certain powers that the government was interested in exploiting for their benefit. Not as skilled as River, yet Ira’s abilities were worth Parliament experimentation. He and his crew now roam the universe, and like many of the old independent fights, are being driven further and further away from the core worlds in order to make a living and survive. God help them…..

PS: Ira Eggers, his ship, the “Vulture” and his crew are properties of Bruce Pluto and Z…..their writer and creator. They are fine actors, whiny at times, but like I keep telling them “If you can find a better job, take it!”. I pay them in beaver pelts because…..I can, and they are constantly wanting more money! If any other fan-fic writer on this site would like to hire them, then they’re yours for a measly two square. I’ve about had it with Ira and his crew. They are continually wanting more outta life than just being a character on a page. I keep telling them, “ Hey, that air that you breath cost money! I pay taxes for those government run terraforming operations so quit your belly aching!”….and so it goes….

Anyway, those are my problems, sorry to think I can burden you with my inability to control what I write on the page. So, now

Comments
Thursday, 14 October 2010 23:19
Again...last line was quite cute. Loved this. And the Dollhouse reference...beautifully added. I am liking this. It is definitely interesting.
Sunday, 17 October 2010 10:34
OOoh, looks like someone plans to start a war. I liked Wash's comment that they had more meetings than Parliament. And Serenity is carrying 'booty' not 'cargo'? Interesting, I'm hoping our valiant crew stay sharp. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Tuesday, 19 October 2010 15:40
Howdy Angelle & Alison!

Angelle, glad that you like the “Dollhouse” thing…yeah, I liked putting that in there. Also, Wash is the king of the 1-liners. Alan Tudyk was a master at line delivery. He could make someone laugh with what he was saying even when the focus was on another part of the dialogue.

Alison…… Serenity delivering the weapons for the Independence to start another war? We should be so lucky. Yepper, Mal calling another meeting to tell his crew about what is going on is just his way of keeping them informed. Not that they have any say about what he will do next…..lol.

Thank you guys for the posts….. I love getting them!

BPZ

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