Spin Chap-7 Mission Complete?
Tuesday, October 12, 2010
Howdy Browncoats- The final chapter of “Spin” is posted below. Hope ppl enjoyed it. Got a few extra twists & turns that I hope came out well. Anyway…Thanks to Angelle, Amdobell and Byetmite for their posts on past sessions of the story. I’m adding a subtitle to this because there may be more in the future. Thanks for reading..BP
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Spin
Chapter 7-Mission Complete?
Cast of Players & Places:
Iron Eagle or Eagle Eye- Ira Eggers
GAT
WWDC15-Warden Wartouski Detainment Center 15.
Mal Reynolds
Jayne Cobb
River Tam
Simon Tam
Zoë Washburn
Wash- Washburn
Kaylee
Shepherd Book
Inara
References:
(1) Zhu bi bing kuo nao = Hog nose and snail brains
(2) gong niu pi hua = Bull shit
Mission Complete?
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The man certainly had felt that he had dodged a bullet, both figuratively and literally, by not accompanying Iron Eagle and his jail-break buddy out of cell-block E6.
Gat had remained in the cell-block, near level 4 and was listening to the sounds of heavy equipment being moved about on the upper levels of WWDC15 above his head. There were all kinds of things going on up there and the air was filled with the buzz of excitement.
He was sure, at some point the authorities would venture in and interrogate him into telling them what had happened. He planned to tell them everything, spill his guts.
What Iron Eagle had told him about his detainee sentence being increased must have been a lie. How could he know that his detainment term had been extended? It must have been some kind of fen fei Iron Eagle had cooked up to have him accompany them.
He could see that the two men had been old war buddies, backwater trash from one of the rim worlds. They had likely been going to use him as a decoy. Someone to position out front when the bullets went to flying.
Well, he had foiled their little plan. At least they hadn’t shot him right there on the spot! Likely didn’t want to face murder charges if they were caught.
Gat could hear the sound of people approaching, “Guards!”,….he rushed into his detainment cell and tried to close the cell door behind him. It wouldn’t lock!! There must be something in the locking mechanize that once sprung, the code had to be reset in order for it to switch back.
Two men then entered his room. “Detainment gua
"You can't take the sky from me!"
From your post I get the feeling that you aren’t to thrilled over finding out that Gat was actually Simon and River’s father. Well, can’t say I blame you there. The man pretty well shocked me when, in the series he voiced to Simon that he was pretty much washing his hands of him after bailing him out of the confinement compound on Osirus.
Still, he was their father, and his children love him. The idea of the story kinda came out of watching that episode and thinking how brutal it would be if someone’s parents were penalized for something they had done, or vise versa. Is this what humankinds advanced system of government has become? Not a pretty picture Joss has painted of our future, do you think?
I do agree with Joss’ perception of our future if we don’t change.
Anyhoo, staying away from politics (with the exception of future politics) I would say that ppl ruling over other ppl, to the point of slavery hasn’t changed much.
Another question that can be brought up about this series of fan-fic writing is “what about River and Simon’s mother?” That is entirely another series completely. Maybe it will surface later, but for now I haven’t any plans on perusing that angle of the works.
Thanks for you post…..BP
Anyway, grand tale, Sir. Good twists and turns....
ready for more.... hee hee
Thanks for the feedback & I am glad that you liked the final to “Spin”.
Yes ma’am you are totally RIGHT about River not wanting to include Mal in on her plan to rescue her father. I meant to post that to Alison but forgot to. Anyway….Mal may be very good at making plans, but River by far is better at impulse maneuvering. If I recall correctly if it hadn’t been for Miss Tam in the BDM…..after only fifteen minutes into the show….half the crew of Serenity would have become reaver pie…..lol.
Thanks for taking a look and posting up…..your friend ZBP.
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