Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Spin- chap2

Tuesday, October 5, 2010

Good morning browncoats. It was a beautiful day outside yesterday, and me being off work and all. Wouldn’t you know it that I spent most the day inside my house watching the 4th season of Dexter and writing fan-fic for the best tv show that ever was……so forgive me but I do enjoy Firefly that much, to the point where I have to create some of it on my own……..Anyhoo, chapter 2 of “Spin” become so long that I decided to pull a Dexter and actually cut it in half. So here this morning I’m posting Chaps2 & 3.…chap 4 to come soon, but today being another pretty day I’ll likely spend a good portion of it getting some fresh air……hope you like the stories…..BP

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Chapter 2

Cast of Players & Places:

Iron Eagle or Eagle Eye- Ira Eggers

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WWDC15-Warden Wartouski Detainment Center 15.

Mal Reynolds

Jayne Cobb

River Tam

Simon Tam

Zoë Washburn

Wash- Washburn

Kaylee

Shepherd Book

Inara

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*SPIN*

River Tam often though of words and their meanings, or what they referred to. Not that her brain had been soaked in Alliance diesel fluid so long that it was beyond having cohesive thought. On the contrary, River’s mind held thoughts, and secrets that would likely make other humans insane. She was one of a handful of subjects the powers of government knew could withstand the intense training and testing as needed for development of something useful for them in the verse, something special.

*SPIN*,………the word was shifting around in the young River Tam‘s brain. What was the use of SPIN? The young Tam questioned. A spider could spin it’s web. A teller of tall tales could spin a story. The hands of a clock could spin around it‘s face, and a world in the universe could spin on it’s axis. Yes! This is what River Tam had on her mind right at that moment. The spinning of a planet as it moved through it’s orbit.

Commonly known but not particularly interesting to you average air breathing human being, or critter mind you, but the revolutions by which planets and moons rotated in the system were at different speeds. Yes they spun faster or slower than others around them, and yes this effected all of “Time” , and how it was used in the verse. Time of arrival, time of departure. Time to eat, time to sleep. Time to send a shipment of goods to a customer, time to receive them, time to plan a robbery, and time to bury your dead.

Every moon and planet spun at a different pace, yet time for them was measured the same. It boggler your average human mind, so much so that most people didn’t concern themselves with it. But it didn’t boggle Rivers mind. The girl Tam was used to having compl

Comments
Tuesday, 05 October 2010 18:43
Okay...first off...loved the bit of River. Her mind is such a challenge to write and I liked how well you handled it as well as bringing in the title....

Eagle Eye...he's a piece of work and I will love getting to know him more as Mal gets him out. ;)

And the final little thing with Mal...the feather introduction was spot one. I liked that...loyal Mal...perfect.

Nicely done...now for chapter three..

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