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Spin Chapter 1

Monday, October 4, 2010

Starting a new story arc……SPIN, and just as the title implies I hope to be doing a bit of it in the storyline. Hope you enjoy the first session…….BP

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Chapter 1

Cast of Players & Places:

Iron Eagle or Eagle Eye- Ira Eggers

WWDC15- Warden Wartowski Detainment Center 15.

Mal Reynolds

Jayne Cobb

River Tam

Simon Tam

Zoë Washburn

Wash- Washburn

Kaylee

Shepherd Book

Inara

Prologue:

“Gat! Hey Gat you awake?” The guy across the corridor stood at his cell bars trying to get subject #612-8357 to talk to him. Ira Eggers knew the man across the way laying in his bunk wasn’t sleeping, only ignoring him.

“ Come on Gat I know you’re awake! Want to play a game of “spotter” before morning breakfast gets here? There was no answer from the other cell. Subject # 693-2154, Iron Eagle, or Eagle Eye as he was known, had been in this lock-down section of WW-DC15 level E6 for six months now. There weren’t any real names used down here, only nicknames, abbreviations, or names pinned on you by other inmates or guards.

Iron Eagle was the name given to Ira Eggers because of the claims he’d made of his past his lineage linking him to peoples that used to be native Americans back on the home world of “Earth That Was”. In the history books they’d been known as “Indians”, a proud ancestry, brave, and skilled in the art of war and legend to be known as great fighters against overwhelming odds.

This had been true of Iron Eagle. He had enlisted in the Independent army after the outbreak of war and had joined the rush of his fellow browncoats as many of the rim worlds and border planets united in the common cause for their freedoms. He had hailed from his adopted planet “Shadow”, where he had once worked as a ranch hand and was treated more as a family member than an employee.

Iron Eagle was a veteran of the battle of Serenity Valley and had been among the browncoat faction that had raised the Independent colors over the hilltop of Mount Xian Xue. He was also one of the few survivors of that battle and that flag raising.

Iron Eagle had always kept two feathers with him. Feathers known to be from a great bird, a bird that had once soared in large numbe

Comments
Monday, 04 October 2010 12:09
Oooh, brilliant start! I already like Iron Eagle and can guess who is holding the other feather. Looks to be an intriguing story, can't wait for more. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Monday, 04 October 2010 13:44
AWESOME!! Me likes Iron Eagle too. Wonderful start and I loved the details in the first part with him spinning the feather and the words spoken to his brother. Well versed.....more please.
Monday, 04 October 2010 19:39
Amdobell thank you for the comments and posting up! I’m glad that you like Iron Eagle, I like him too, of course I like almost anyone who is, or ever has been a browncoat. They are just my kind of people.

So, you believe you know who the has the second feather and who Ira Eggers feels as close to as a brother? Well if he wears a long brown duster at times and has someone close to him calling him “Sir” some of the time, then you are probably right ….hee…hee. I really do appreciate your dropping me a post saying that you like the story so far, means a lot hearing that folk are enjoying what I write.

Angelle my friend, always a pleasure to see you post up! I knew you’d catch that “spin” part with the quill (smile). You have that amazing eye for detail…….more of Iron Eagle and the crew of Serenity coming up in continuing chapters. Hope I can keep you interested.

Take care my friends, BPZ

PS: Chap2 will likely go up tomorrow, and will be a little more informative about WWDC15 and I think I’ll start picking Rivers brain pan a bit……just a little.
Sunday, 10 October 2010 17:52
I myself have always been interested in introducing the Native American aspect into Firefly, especially because they have such a prominent role in most other Westerns.

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